We are all introduced to comics at some point in our lives.  (Who hasn’t read a Peanuts comic strip?)  Sadly, the comic book, or graphic novel (collection of comic books), is looked down as a children’s pastime or ruled out as non-compelling literature altogether.  On March 6, 2009, the highly anticipated film adaptation of the first graphic novel to be praised as a master work of literature made its big screen debut. 

There is no immediate consensus on public reaction to the film.  Depending on which group you fall under, you would either love it for its originality, or hate it for changing pivotal scenes from the source material after constant promises to stick as true to the book as possible.

This article appeals to both the educated and uneducated persons in the world of the WATCHMEN!

THE NOVEL

Before I can begin, you need to know the story of the Watchmen (assuming you haven’t seen the movie by this article date).

This synopsis from the publisher DC Comics:

“It all begins with the paranoid delusions of a half-insane hero called Rorschach.  But is Rorschach really insane or has he in fact uncovered a plot to murder superheroes and, even worse, millions of innocent civilians?  On the run from the law, Rorschach reunites with his former teammates in a desperate attempt to save the world and their lives, but what they uncover will shock them to their very core and change the face of the planet!  Following two generations of masked superheroes from the close of World War II to the icy shadow of the Cold War comes this groundbreaking comic story — the story of The Watchmen.”

None of the heroes from the novel are recognized instantly in our culture.  None of the heroes ever got spinoff comics after the critical acclaim of the short series.   Watchmen is a murder mystery developed with the same hard work and care that goes into making a fiction novel.  Both author Alan Moore – famous for this and other works of fiction such as From Hell and V for Vendetta – and illustrator Dave Gibbons have painfully crafted a complex, multilayered, psychological anti-hero adventure that spanned a year in telling (1986-87).  The end result is the perennial and most influential “graphic novel” ever accomplished.  The humanity exuded by each character is strikingly real and relatable.  It is this main element along with the real-world scenario that inspired realistic retellings of future popular comic book superheroes. 

The story takes place in an alternate United States in 1985.  The world is in the middle of a Cold War, particularly between the two nuclear superpowers: the USA and the Soviet Union.  The setting nearly parallels our world except that masked vigilantes are part of the culture, the USA wins the Vietnam War, Richard Nixon is still President in 1985 and the “Superman does exist, and he is American.” 

The attention to detail in terms of the character development, political climate, public sentiment towards masked heroes, and government employment of heroes is all very real, very relatable, very, um, heartfelt.  It’s the realism of the plot that turns the story from a mere fiction to a piece of American History. 

For those that haven’t noticed, up until the debut of Watchmen, the only heroes mingling with citizens of real-world cities belonged to Marvel Comics.  DC Comics superheroes live in alternate versions of American cities. (e.g. the equivalent of New York City and Chicago in the DC Universe are Metropolis and Gotham City.)  Along comes Watchmen and thrusts heroes not only into our cities but into our cultural history.  It is this connection to the real world, the very real interaction between masked heroes, the average citizen, federal government, etc. that sets Watchmen on a league of its own.  Many have tired duplicating it but have never matched its complexity and success.

It is safe to say that the medium of comic books has never been the same since.  And with many popular comic books getting motion picture adaptations, the movie treatment for Watchmen was unavoidable.  It was just a matter of when a good script, the director with the right approach and visual style to bring the story to life would come along.  Twenty-three years later and after a surge of an ever-increasing number of comic books-turned-films hitting multiplexes, Watchmen finally made it to the big leagues with a nearly 3-hour epic theatrical release.

THE FILM

The Watchmen movie version moved around different studios with scripts written then rewritten over and over again without any true convincing concept to bring to the big screen.  Director Terry Gilliam used to be tied to directing the big screen adaptation in the late 90s.  He stated best the complications of making a 2 ½ hour version of the novel:

“Reducing [the novel] to a two or two-and-a-half-hour film … seemed to me to take away the essence of what Watchmen is about.” 

I, like Terry, agree that a miniseries would’ve been the best avenue with which to approach the story.  Though it felt like an eternity, it was inevitable that the graphic novel would get its major motion picture treatment.  Now is a good-a-time as any to do so since movies containing dark, mature subject matter are drawing more audiences to the theatres (e.g. The Dark Knight).

The difficulty in bringing about this book-to-screen adaptation is in how to keep the essence of the book intact while making the film a fascinating viewing experience.  Compromises had to be made, of course.  Whenever anyone is tackling the adaptation of a popular work, groups of purists, fans, and dissenters will always be nearby ready to level any criticism in attempts to impact the filmmaking process.

The great risk of Watchmen is that it is not really adaptable without first tossing out important elements of the book that make the story “the story,” and still keep it short enough to screen at a theatre near you.  Warner Bros realized this issue which is why they hired Director Zack Snyder to take the helm for the project.  They needed to stay as true to the source material as possible.  Zack Snyder promised to deliver the goods as he did with Frank Miller’s 300.

Ultimately, an all-important comic-within-the-comic – Tales of the Black Freighter – didn’t make the final cut, but it is getting its own film treatment as a direct-to-video.  However, the comic tale is such an integral part of the major story that Warner Bros is producing a special DVD release that will include deleted scenes and the Tales of the Black Freighter edited into the main film.

This is evidence that the filmmakers knew the importance of keeping integral parts of the novel in place and did their best to execute the film appropriately.  Comic book illustrator Dave Gibbons was brought on early on to supervise the filmmaking process to make sure they stayed true to the source.  

THE CONTROVERSIAL ENDING

A fan could sleep soundly knowing that such a talented team dedicated to preserving the essence of the novel is developing the movie, right?  Well, months before the initial release date, speculation about a major revamp to the climax grew amid attempts to keep it hush-hush.  After constant pressure from the press and fans director Zack Snyder dropped the bombshell confirmation that the most major element and integral part of the script was altered to suit a more general audience.

The squid in the novel is a byproduct of artistic design and genetic engineering developed under the guise of a movie special effect.  The actual purpose of the disgusting, giant squid was to fool the world into thinking it’s an alien from another dimension hell-bent on destroying all humanity.

The movie version of “the squid" is re-imagined as a supposed new energy research project intended to provide cleaner, more efficient means of energy to an ever-growing human population.  

The actual purpose is for the villain to reengineer these large mechanical devices, use them as psychic energy explosives each with the destructive power of an A-bomb, and frame one of the Watchmen for the attack.

The villain’s end game in both mediums is the same: unite the world by scaring them into believing they must ward off a common enemy.  In both cases he succeeds

The Original Ending

When Rorschach investigates the murder of Edward Blake – alias The Comedian – he believes there is a plot to kill off costumed heroes.  He sets off to warn other retired heroes of his findings.  While Rorschach is investigating the murder there is an entire other mystery being covered by the Press: the mysterious disappearance of yet another famous creative artist.  The artist is among a group of his peers that “vanishes” without a trace. He is working with scientists, engineers, and others on a secret project for an unknown “filmmaker” all along.   Rorschach’s wild theory about a mask killer is taken more seriously when another hero – Adrian Veidt – is gunned for, Dr. Manhattan flees the earth for Mars, and Rorschach is framed and imprisoned.  All this is occurring during a time of political tension between the two superpowers threatening to go to nuclear war and lay waste to the earth.

Illustrator Dave Gibbons was asked about the cutting of the squid during a Q&A session at the 4^th Annual New York Comic Convention back in February.  His initial response was:

“The outcome is exactly the same as the graphic novel, but the MacGuffin, the gimmick, is a little different.  I think you know what I mean; there's no squid.  I'd rather not say too much about it, but I certainly wasn't at all upset or disappointed or offended.  I think that's the most important thing about the movie adaptation is that it has to stand as a good movie.  The reality of it is that you have to make changes and you have to take things away, add things on, amalgamate things to make it work in a different medium."

After a follow-up question regarding the squid, he answered:

“Why is the squid so important?  In a sense, in the comic book, the squid is kind of a huge special effect that Adrian Veidt pulls, a practical joke, a trick, but if you have a movie that essentially is full of special effects, then the squid is just another special effect, if you see what I mean, so that I think that wouldn't have worked as well in the movie.  That's my personal feeling about it.  Sorry for all your cephalopod lovers out there.”

So, Dave isn't really a fan of the squid since he wasn’t disappointed by its omission from the film.  He didn't write it.  He drew it from concept ideas by author Alan Moore.  For Dave to come across with little regard for the original concept comes to show that even he doesn't understand what exactly Moore accomplished with the alien squid. 

Historically, anyone believing aliens exist is thought of as kind of crazy.  Whether there's evidence to support the existence of aliens isn't the issue here.  Imagine the disbelief at seeing a horrific scene such as a monstrous, alien squid appearing in the middle of Manhattan and killing millions an in instant.  The apparent “attack” by an alien being would more likely unite a world of differences against a common enemy. 

The idea of forging alliances amid a foreign invasion isn't farfetched.  It’s happened before.  When the Japanese invaded China, the Chinese Communists and Nationalists united albeit under a temporary truce to ward off the Japanese.  After the horrific events of September 11, 2001, America put aside its ideological differences albeit for a while to seek justice against a common enemy.

The Alternate Ending

The framing of Dr. Manhattan in the movie adaptation doesn’t make any sense unless you’re on the left side of the political spectrum.  See, the subliminal message I drew from the altered ending is that Dr. Manhattan is viewed as a walking A-bomb created and used by the United States government for the “greater good.”  When the psychic charges are detonated on major cities across the world, the world suddenly forgets about nuclear war and unites to defend itself against Dr. Manhattan; man’s own god-like power turns against man.  The film concludes with the world adopting clean energy alternatives and world peace. 

That’s it.

Well, why would Dr. Manhattan attack the world in the first place?  He was framed for giving his former loved ones cancer, felt terrible believing he was guilty of it, leaves the Earth for Mars, then returns to kill millions around the world?  Nonsense.  Also, the USA didn’t create Dr. Manhattan; he was an accident.  This only scratches the surface of why the ending doesn’t make sense.  You’d have to read the novel to understand The Comedian’s emotional breakdown, his murder, and the shock value of what ultimately convinced the USA and USSR to make peace.

WHICH IS THE BETTER ENDING?

The debate continues.  The novel’s ending always sparked debate about whether it was a great or lackluster ending to a great novel.  The movie ending caused a stir prior to the film’s debut quickly causing an outcry from purists and debates among the viewing public.

Yes, the outcome of the film's and novel's ending is the same, but the point missed here is that the means to that end are what intrigued the reader in the first place.  So many mysterious occurrences having seemingly nothing in common throughout the plot actually are tied at the end of the novel through the monstrosity of the squid.

CLOSING COMMENTS

At least the film’s lead up to the poorly constructed ending was very well done but could have been better without slow-motion.

Still, the ending should’ve remained intact instead of trying to appeal to a more general audience.  Fanboys are always a major draw at the box office (e.g. The Dark Knight).  The movie opened well below expectations and doesn’t seem likely to recoup its budget in the domestic market.

The book will always be superior to the film.

–Andres Segovia
Published 3/11/2009
Revised 7/1/2024

Toto-sai stared at the luscious green field and flower beds that was once a dark ruin.  Nature’s changing seasons eliminated all traces of Naraku’s destruction.  It’s been several of years since that final confrontation with the wicked demon.  Toto-sai reminisced of the life-changing event.  No one walked away the same.  He signaled to his trusty flying bull to carrying them to their destination.  After sometime, Toto-sai arrived at Lady Kaede’s village.  There children laughed and played.  Lady Kaede was much older and moved slower now, but she was happy to awake each morning knowing that her village, and the children at play will never have to worry about Naraku again.

              A teenage Kohaku practiced sword play out on the fields with a friend. Both of them were strengthening their skills as demon slayers.  Naraku, the worst demon of all, was gone, but demons remained on the land.  Lady Kaede’s village became a place desperate villagers turned to for help to exorcize demons.  This became good business for the village.  The head slayers were Miroku and Sango.  Miroku though was the main slayer.  Sango had other matters to tend to.

              Two toddler twin girls tugged at Lady Kaede’s skirt begging to come out of the porch to watch them run around outside.  Lady Kaede struggled to move at the little girls’ pace.  Sango came out of the house to help Lady Kaede.  She told the little girls to go play.  She told them that grandma Kaede would be there.  Lady Kaede braced herself on Sango’s arm, and placed another hand on Sango’s stomach unable to resist the urge to feel the child growing inside Sango.  The twin girls called out to Lady Kaede and their mother Sango as both of the girls ran in circles.  The women laughed at the little girls’ sport.

              A shadow appeared behind Sango and Lady Kaede.  The women turned to the approaching Sesshomaru followed by Jaken, Aun, and Kagura.  Sesshomaru came by to check up on Rin.  Lady Kaede pointed to the field where Rin was practicing sword play with Kohaku.  Sesshomaru cracked a smile.  He extended a small sack of silver for Lady Kaede.  Lady Kaede always refused his offer, but Sesshomaru likewise always insisted.  Sesshomaru took his leave with group and left to continue their travels helping others in need along the way.

              Sango and Lady Kaede sat on a wicker bench on the grass taking in the scenes of children playing.  For a moment, Sango thought of her husband Miroku.  She tried not to be so concerned about his safety.  After all, Miroku was exorcizing demons along with the aid of Shippo now a much more mature, and strong fox demon. 

There were times a large flying creature would pass over the village.  Members of the village rushed out each time hoping to catch a glimpse of a dragon and perhaps Raygan.  After the confrontation with Naraku, Raygan and Akemi parted ways hoping to one day return.  Sango only hoped to meet her friends again, but she also understood the responsibilities Raygan and Akemi had back on the mainland.  Right now, Sango truly missed more than anyone Kagome and Inuyasha.  Ever since Inuyasha transformed, the rest of the events that followed happened so quickly she never felt she properly said farewell to them.  She just hoped that they are well wherever it was they were.

*******

              Kagome looked at her watch.  Her class was only minutes from being excused.  She was in her last year of studies at Tokyo University.  Kagome would soon transfer to a medical school more focused on her field.  Becoming a doctor was a long road.  Finally, class was dismissed.  Some of the classmates wished her a good day.  She waved them goodbye and walked to the courtyard of the campus.  She proceeded to the adjacent public park to meet someone.  There on one of the picnic tables having lunch was a man intently pouring over papers trying to make sense of them.  Kagome approached him and asked if she can be of assistance.  He nodded and made space for her next to him.  Kagome looked over the papers.  It was an application to enter into law enforcement.  She looked at the black-haired, sharp-eyed man.  She smiled at him and kissed her fiancé.

              “You want to be a police officer?” she asked him.

              “What else can I do that will give me some action?  Traffic guards are boring.  Firefighters sit and wait.  I want to move!” he replied.

              “Oh, Inuyasha,” she laughed looking over the documents. “Ever the restless one.  I’ll help you fill this out.”

              The two lovers sat the picnic table in the beautiful, peaceful park in the middle of the one of the largest cities in world.  Here, no one worried so much about demons.  It was more civilized.  There was more to do and more to see, in a way.  Inuyasha took a couple of years to adjusting to life here especially as a human.  But he loved Kagome.  He wanted to be with her at all costs even if that meant leaving behind the only life he knew.  She was his world.  He choose to be human for her and returned with her to this industrialized world.  The well that connected both the old and new worlds collapsed shortly after they returned to Tokyo.  Though it was hard for both of them to be free from that past, they settled into their new life.  Kagome showed Inuyasha everything that needed to be known about the culture, engineering, science, and medicinal advances.  Of course she also showed him all sorts of foods.  Inuyasha learned to be at peace, and it was the food that he much preferred compared to the Feudal Era.  But in the midst of all this, it was Kagome.  She made it worth the choice, and he was glad he choose her.  His friends in the other time did not have to worry about the dangers of the jewel.  He wished them all well and a healthy life.  Especially for Koga.  He did end up marrying Ayame after all and became the new wolf clan leader.  Differences aside, they all made a great team when their support mattered most.

              Kagome pulled out an apple and took a bite out of it while looking over the application.  Inuyasha asked her if she was hungry.  Kagome told him she skipped lunch to finish up a paper.  Inuyasha took the application off her hands and put it in her backpack.  He got her backpack and books then said, “Let’s go eat.”  Kagome asked where.  “Let’s go to that ramen place!” Inuyasha responded excitedly.  He did not mind that he just finished a bowl of instant noodles.  He was always up for ramen.  Kagome got up and hugged his arm as they walked to the noodle restaurant.  “I’m craving a Coke too,” Inuyasha added.  Kagome laughed.  The paired walked away from the park enjoying each other’s company.

Each of Naraku’s enemies have followed the scent of that evil demon.  The scent has led them to the last secret location of Naraku’s fortress.  In the last battle with Naraku, Inuyasha broke through barrier and fatally wounded Naraku.  Naraku disappeared and lay dormant in a cave deceiving a powerful priest into creating a barrier around his cave that would purify any demon that would try to come near.  Secretly, he was healing himself and trying to rid of the human heart of Onigumo.  Though he almost got rid of the heart, he was forced out of hiding and to relocate his fortress as soon as his powers permitted.  Naraku is still not fully restored.  In order to become more powerful he requires the entire Jewel of Four Souls.  With his human and half-demon enemies containing much of the rest of the shards, Naraku devised a trap to lure them in so that he can collect the remaining shards. 

              The barrier around his fortress was weakened.  His enemies took the bait.  Though his wind sorceress betrayed him, he still has the great ability to create more incarnations of himself to destroy his enemies.  His trap, however, would have to be more elaborate. 

              Destiny has been delayed for over fifty years.  The completion of the Shikon no Tama is at hand.  Naraku trusted in his own strength believing that at the end of the day he would possess the whole Sacred Jewel.

              Kohaku, Naraku’s possessed boy, has a shard buried in his flesh keeping him alive and enslaved to Naraku’s will. Koga the Wolf Demon has two shards in his legs. Kagome carries the rest of the shard pieces Naraku needs.

*******

              Inuyasha led the party consisting of Kagome, Sango, Miroku, Shippo, Kirara, and Koga.  Following behind at a distance were the exhausted Ginta and Hakkaku from Koga’s wolf clan. Further behind them were Toto-sai, Myoga, and Hachie.

              “Keep up, lazies!” ordered Koga to his wolf clan.

              Inuyasha cringed just at any time Koga opened his boisterous mouth.  He shrugged off his annoyance of Koga and focused on following the scent of Naraku.

              The ghastly weather made it difficult to see the distance.  Clusters of trees appeared in the purple fog as they continued on their way.  The clusters became more frequent and denser.  Eventually, they found themselves in a labyrinth of trees thick and thin.  The scent kept getting stronger as they got nearer, but the route became more difficult.

              “Which way do we go?” asked Kagome.  “We could be lost in this forest for days.”

              “No problem,” Inuyasha withdrew his Tessaiga.  “We’ll make a way!”  He lifted the mighty sword.  “Wind scar!”  The trees parted like the Red Sea.  “See? Naraku is going to have to do better than that to slow us down!”

              The party followed Inuyasha.  Every several yards he used the Tessaiga to cut a new path through the increasingly dense forest.

*******

              “I don’t know what to make of this,” exclaimed Ayame.

              A pack of wolves accompanied Ayame as she approached the dense forest following the scent of Naraku. The closely packed trees formed a sort of maze she had to navigate through.  The wolves stayed close to her keeping alert while she looked for passages to squeeze through. She gasped at the sound of a trees cracking and breaking.  For a moment she was alarmed, but then she picked up the scent of Inuyasha and Koga.  The wolves panted with excitement to see Koga again.

              Ayame and the wolves pressed through the thick forest following the familiar scents and the loud explosion sounds.

*******

              Inuyasha was determined to get to Naraku, but all the slashing was making him tired and fast.

              “Perhaps we might to able to glide over the tree, Inuyasha,” Miroku suggested the obvious.

              “That fog is too thick and the trees are tall,” Sango warned.  “It looks too risky and we can’t all be carried. Besides, the miasma still looks very thick up there.”

              “Damn, Naraku’s teases!” declared Koga.  “Can’t face us directly. Got to make things complicated.  No matter.  I’ll lead us now,” he turned to Inuyasha.  “You can rest, pup.  I got this!”

              Inuyasha frowned.  The rest of the group followed Koga’s lead.  Toto-sai, Myoga, and Hachie lingered.  The deeper they entered the forest the more afraid they grew.  A new scent and a few twig snaps startled Hachie.  Myoga quickly proceeded to hide in Toto-sai’s cloak.

              Koga and the others stopped too at the sound of the rustling nearby.

              Everyone released a sigh of relief at the sight of Ayame and her wolves.  Everyone except Koga.

              “Ayame! What are you doing here?” Koga asked looking shocked.

              “I’m here to help battle Naraku!” stated Ayame. 

              After a few formalities the group continued their journey through the tree maze.  Ayame and the other girls caught up with their exploits since their last meeting.  Koga walked at lead cringing his teeth.  All he thought about was how Kagome might get the wrong impression about him and Ayame.  In this case, Kagome would be right.  Koga is very insecure about marrying a female as strong-willed as Ayame.  She is his equal in nearly every way from bravery to good looks.

              Why did she have to appear now? Koga wondered. She has always followed me never giving me room to myself, always pretending to be in love. Okay, so we are betrothed to marry. That was not my doing! It was all arranged. Father said she is the best for me. Ha! What does he know? He wasn’t with her as long as I have been. I need a woman that’s relaxed like Kagome. Ayame is too, too strong willed. She’s brave enough to fight her own battles. Not that I’m complaining but it’s nice to be the stronger one! Well, I am the stronger one no matter what! And I got the shards of Shikon Jewel in me to make me that much stronger! Sigh, why do I feel as if I’m just rambling –

              Koga walked right into a tree. The rest of the group gave him puzzled stares. Koga growled, made up a fib as to why slamming into the tree was necessary for him to navigate through the forest, and then continued to cut left leading them through the forest

*******

              The somewhat watery reflection of the traveling party rippled from center to edge on Kanna’s mirror.  Naraku studied the party.  Quite of few of them have gathered thus far.  He knew more where on the way.  The demonic forest maze would keep Inuyasha and the others occupied until Naraku lured the rest of his prey.

              The demon kept looking at the mirror.  Though he was expressionless on the surface, inside his human shell there was a swelling of something he had not felt before: nervousness.  The ever powerful, the ever elusive Naraku deceived, killed, betrayed, possessed, and destroyed anything and everything to get ahead, to be one step closer to his goal of eternal immortality without any of his “human” weakness. This time, Onigumo’s beating heart got the better of him.  What he was feeling were the early steps of anxiety.  All of his enemies would soon be at his temporary hideout.  Naraku had already vowed to fight them all.  His slowly deteriorating powers need the whole Shikon Jewel in order to be not only powerful yet again, but the most powerful demon.

              The distorted figures on the mirror shifted to show a priestess walking alone.  As the priestess neared the dense forest she paused knowing she was being watched.  Slithery dark creatures carrying bright orbs drew near to her.  As they got near the orbs disappeared into the priestess’ body then ventured away in a hurry.  The priestess remained motionless then looked in the direction of the viewer of the mirror.  Naraku was startled for a moment. The priestess glared as if trying to burn a hole through the unseen stalker.  She then walked into the forest and faded from the mirror.

              “Kanna,” the evil demon stared out of the window of his dark quarters.  “Have you done as I instructed?”  Kanna nodded.  “Good.  Let me be.” 

Kanna left the room.  Faint rays of moonlight pierced through the fading miasma touching Naraku’s face.  The darkness in the room was not enough to hide the drop of sweat from Naraku’s brow.

*******

              The soft breeze brushed Kagura’s hair to the side.  The wind sorceress has been staring at the pond for what seems like an eternity.  In her heart she knows that Naraku has sinister motives for why he would he would lift the barrier of protection off of his hiding place.  Her heart was warning her to go and help those that helped her.  For a moment she regretted having a heart or else this would not be a conflict.  The irony.  There she stood staring at the body of water trying to create an image, an image of her life without troubles, stress, and responsibility.  She was free to choose how to live her life.  So why now does her heart weigh the choice of returning to Naraku, the sinister devil she has been trying to escape from all her life?

              Damn you, Naraku!  Will I ever be rid of you?

*******

              Sesshomaru proceeded through the twists and turns the strange forest made.

              “Lord Sesshomaru, there is something definitely strange about this forest,” analyzed Jaken as they navigated the forest.  “These trees seem to be watching us.”

              Nothing deterred Sesshomaru. He was focused on facing Naraku, though, he could not help but also think of Rin’s safety.  He did not want to second guess his decision to leave her with Aun.  Sesshomaru is no fool.  He is well aware that Naraku is devising an elaborate trap for all who come.  Still, Sesshomaru could not, or would not, miss this opportunity to face Naraku again.  He pressed on with Jaken in tow.

*******

Kikyo examined the paths between the trees.  There were many different foot prints going in all different directions.  She figured the trees moved forcing certain travelers to take different directions.

Naraku, you are playing with your enemies again, she thought.  Or perhaps you are delaying.  But why?

A few more soul eaters brought her souls of the freshly departed to Kikyo.  An unease came over her.  She was not certain if her soul carriers will be able to come through the deeper she ventured into the forest.  Her outer shell depends on the souls of the recently deceased to stay “alive”.  Without more souls to sustain her, she could very well die before seeing this through.  Understanding the risk, Kikyo proceeded anyway. Her desire for revenge far outweighed her livelihood.

*******

              Kagura stared at the open barrier.  All along the way there she kept rhetorically asking herself why she was there.

              This is ridiculous!  I should leave before it’s too late.  Her eyes stared intensely in direction of Naraku’s castle.  She clenched her fist over her hand.  Her heart raced.  I suppose this is what it means to have a heart. . . She crossed the barrier into the demonic forest.  I better live to regret this!

              Kagura looked down and follow what appeared to be freshly made footprints.

*******

              Kanna stood on the balcony of Naraku’s fortress.  She looked out in direction of the forest maze Naraku made for his enemies.  The view from the fortress was obscured by the evening mist and the miasma fog.  Kanna felt nothing.  She did not feel hate or sadness.  She did not feel happiness or joy.  She was not sure how she should react over the imminent encounter.  No matter.  She was prepared to perform her duty per Naraku’s instructions.

              The miasma started to lift.  The demon forest was visible now.  Kanna could see the trees rustling without wind.  Suddenly, many of the trees starting shifting moving into another formation like soldiers called into attention.  Naraku approached Kanna on the balcony.

              “It is time, Kanna.  Go to the field and meet them,” he instructed.

              Kanna slightly bowed and left.  Kohaku was already in position.  Naraku preceded to meditate.  Something – or things – began to move and shift under his flesh.  Naraku opened his mouth to let out a yell.  The sound was that of dozens of distorted banshee cries.  A dozen large spider legs branched out from underneath him.  His arms ripped into large crab-like pinchers.  His body turned into that of a large lion.  His eyes burned red.  His teeth sharpened and nostrils smoked.  He licked his lips with a reptile tongue.  Naraku was now battle ready.

*******

              Inuyasha and the group drew weapons and took a defensive formation as the trees continued to clear a path.  The trees thumped and creaked and rustled their branches and leaves.  As the trees retreated from the valley, the other travelers were revealed to the group. 

              “Sesshomaru, what the hell are you doing here?” Inuyasha cringed at the sight of his brother.

              Sesshomaru and Jaken calmly approached Inuyasha, Kagome, and the others.

              “Seriously, what are you doing here?” pressed Inuyasha.

              “I could ask the same of you, Inuyasha, but we both know the answer,” Sesshomaru answered.

              “You came here for Naraku too?” asked Kagome.  “Then this is great news!  We can all work together!”  Kagome was giddy over the fact that Inuyasha and Sesshomaru will work together for once instead of against one another.

              “Whatever!” snapped Inuyasha.  “We don’t need your help!  Get lost, Sesshomaru!”

              Koga tried to intervene, but Sesshomaru was obviously the more intimidating of the dog demons.  He figured it best not to get between the sibling rivalry.

              “Inuyasha,” Sesshomaru stared coldly at his brother.  “I’m here for Naraku, not you.  Let’s settle our differences some other time.  Now, Jaken and I will be on our way to his castle.”

              Inuyasha boiled, but before he reacted boldly, he froze at the sight of another forest wonderer: Kikyo.

              Kagome gasped.  Sango, Miroku, and Shippo were equally shocked to see Kikyo again.

              Oh, no!  Kagome thought jealously.  Inuyasha, please don’t lose your focus!  I know you still have feelings for her, but now is not to time to deal with it!

              But it was too late.  Inuyasha wasted no time speeding past his brother to rush over to Kikyo.

              The rest of the crowd just stood there not sure of what to do next.

              “This is awkward,” Koga finally broke the silence.  He approached Sesshomaru to introduce himself.  “Sesshomaru, I’m Koga.  I must admit, you look nothing like your brother.”

              “You will address him as Lord Sesshomaru, wolf demon!” interjected Jaken.

              “Hey, relax.  I’m just trying to make friends here,” Koga replied.

              “Lord Sesshomaru does not have friends.  He does not need any.  And he does not need any of you to help him against Naraku!” Jaken spoke loudly.

              Sesshomaru motioned to Jaken to be silent.  Kagome looked away from Inuyasha for a moment to speak for the group to Sesshomaru.

              “Master Sesshomaru, believe me, it is good to see you in a time like this,” Kagome said humbly.  “I don’t think it’s a coincidence we meet here like this.  We don’t have a choice in all this.  We must all face Naraku together.”

              “Yeah,” Sango stepped forward.  “It’s obvious he brought us all here.  He’s not careless.”

              “Naraku is sly and calculative,” contributed Miroku.  “He wants us all to be here.”

              “It’s his end game,” concluded Koga.  “Let’s make him sorry for messing with us!”

              Sesshomaru did not react, but Jaken knew the adventurers got their point through to Sesshomaru.

*******

              Inuyasha stopped short of Kikyo.  Kikyo stared straight at him without a reaction.

              “Kikyo,” Inuyasha was not sure if he should take another step forward.

              Inuyasha could not say more.  There was so much he wanted to say, so many thoughts on his mind.  He tried to find the words to tell her that he thought of her every day.  He wanted her to know how much he still cared about Kikyo, and how she’s the only one standing in between him and Kagome.  Inuyasha wanted to tell her how bad he wants to kill Naraku for ruining their relationship.  But he could not say anything.  Years of conflict, memories, emotions in between their last meeting.  There was just no way to say it all in a few sentences.

              “Inuyasha,” whispered Kikyo finally.

              Inuyasha could not hide his emotions.  Kikyo stared straight into his eyes.  All the emotions he had bottled up were forming as tears in his eyes.

              “Inuyasha, I am not here for you,” she said.  “I’m here for Naraku.”

              “Kikyo, I – that’s what I am here for too…”

              “We have both come a long way to get here.  Let’s not interfere with our revenge now.”

              “Kikyo, right now, I want nothing more than to be with you as we teach Naraku a lesson he will never forget!”

              A soul carrier arrived with another soul for Kikyo.  Inuyasha noticed there was only one soul carrier.

              “Kikyo, have you noticed your other soul carriers aren’t around?  They probably can’t get through here!”  Kikyo just stood there.  Inuyasha realized Kikyo was well aware of this risk.  “Kikyo!” Inuyasha grabbed her arms.  “Please don’t do this!”

              “I’m not leaving Inuyasha.”

              “But I don’t want to lose you again!” Inuyasha stared at her intently.  “This time you’ll be gone forever.”

              “Inuyasha,” Kikyo looked away from him.  “I been dead for a long time now.  I know this body is nothing more than a shell.  I still feel – something.  Of the very few emotions I can experience, I still feel for you,” she closed her eyes.  “I knew the risks coming here.  I did not know you would be here.  Still, I cannot stop now.  Naraku must be destroyed.  I want to kill him for taking away my happiness.”  Kikyo opened her eyes to meet Inuyasha’s.  “You were my happiness, Inuyasha.  I wanted to live the rest of my life with you peacefully.  Before I died and since I was resurrected, you and I have not been able to be at peace.  I’ve come to realize the fact that maybe we were just never meant to be.”

              “Don’t say that!” a tear streaked down Inuyasha’s cheek.

              “Inuyasha, this is the first time I’ve seen you cry,” Kikyo searched his face.  “Please listen to me.  We used to be close, but we also hardly knew each other.  We have to put that aside for now so we can be undeterred when facing our enemy.”

              Inuyasha did not understand that Kikyo was literally breaking apart inside.  She wanted to have him now that they met, but once again, it’s Naraku that stands in between them.  Inuyasha let her arms go and motioned her to join the rest of the group.

*******

              Kagome fought back tears.  She knew that Inuyasha harbored feelings for Kikyo after all this time.  She finally understood that Kikyo was the one standing between her and Inuyasha.  As angry as that made her feel, she could not blame Kikyo.  Or Inuyasha.  Right now, she tried to put that behind her to focus on the task before them all.

              Inuyasha guided Kikyo before the group.  Koga, Ayame, and the rest of the wolf pack introduced themselves.  Toto-sai, Myoga, and Hachie greeted her.  Kagome, Sango, Miroku, and Shippo welcomed her.  Sesshomaru and Jaken just spectated.

              Before they all got comfortable, a voice called out to them all to get their attention.  The entire crowd turned to face the source of the voice.  Kagura stood before them.

              “Before any of you try anything brash, let me inform you that I am here for the same reason you all are: Naraku,” she announced to the unconvinced crowd.  “Let me be honest with you.  I don’t care if any of you live or die.  I only care about killing Naraku.”

              “I think she’s telling the truth,” Koga admitted.

              “She is telling the truth,” Sesshomaru shocked everyone with the fact that he said something.  “Kagura, you are finally prepared to face Naraku, I see.”

              “Yes, Lord Sesshomaru.  I got tired of running and flying,” Kagura approached.

              “Just because you’re now an enemy of our enemy doesn’t make us friends,” Inuyasha shouted.

              Kagura made clear that she had no intention of being anyone’s friend.  What she did not say was that she was there for Raygan.  She actually felt a bit relieved that Raygan was not there.  But she still wanted to see him again.  One last time.

              “Enough with the small talk,” Kagura said firmly.  “We all took Naraku’s bait.  He’s going to make his move any moment now.  The trees have all cleared the field, or should I say killing field.  Lucky for us, we don’t need to reach his castle to face him.  That’s where our luck ends.

              “Well, alright then! Let’s do this!” Inuyasha commanded.

              Koga was about to argue his authority to Inuyasha, but Ayame horse-collared him.  “Just let it go,” she said.

              Inuyasha looked like a battalion leader.  He lead the entire group consisting of Kagome, Sango, Miroku, Shippo, Kirara, Toto-sai, Myoga, Hachie, Koga, Ayame, Ginta, Hakkaku, the wolf pack, Sesshomaru, Jaken, Kikyo, and Kagura.

              Naraku, you think you’re smart, but the dumbest thing you ever could have done was to get us all together at the same time! Inuyasha thought confidently they will be victorious.

*******

              The miasma was lifted.  The moon shone on the dark green valley below.  The trees stood at a distance like spectators in an arena.  Atop a plateau on the mountains ahead was a gothic structure.  No light came from it. Little would it matter.  Naraku was not intending to let the approaching travelers near the fortress.  He would meet them in the valley below.

Naraku was all Inuyasha could smell.  The scent only got stronger as they continued their cautious route to the fortress.  It came from all around them.  With the exception of the apparent rocky terrain up ahead, the walk seemed relatively smooth.  That’s what worried Inuyasha.  Just then a small refracted light up ahead caught the group’s attention stopping them on their tracks.

“What is it?” asked Miroku.

“It’s Kanna,” responded Kagura from the rear of the group with some concern. 

“She’s hiding behind one of those rocks,” pointed Ayame.

Kagura frowned.  Damn it! “Those aren’t rocks!”  Everyone turned to her.  Kagura kept staring in Kanna’s direction.  “Those are bodies.”

              “What do you mean, Kagura?” asked Kagome.

              “You know how you’ve come across a lot of villages destroyed by Naraku’s incarnations?  Did you ever wonder why you never found any survivors?” she pointed her fan in direction of the “rocks”.  “There they are.  The survivors.”

              “They all look dead to me,” analyzed Koga.

              The light refracted again.  This time the “rocks” started moving.  The bodies of the recently asleep got up slowly with weapons in hand.  Men, women, children stood up all under Naraku’s spell.  They stood hunched over like puppets.  Kanna was in the midst of them holding her mirror.  She motioned for them to attack the intruding party.  The zombie army shuffled and shift towards Inuyasha and the others.

              The group armed themselves.  Inuyasha raised his Tessaiga prepared to unleash the Wind Scar on the approaching army.  Kagome quickly rushed over to stop him.

              “No, Inuyasha!” Kagome ordered.  “Those people are still alive.”

              “Kagome, they’re going to kill us!” Inuyasha replied.

              “We can’t just kill them, Inuyasha,” she pleaded then turned to Kagura.  “Kagura, is there any way we can free these people?”

              “Well, you’ll have to kill Naraku, of course,” she replied coldly.  “But really, all of these souls are trapped in Kanna’s mirror.  You’ll have to destroy her mirror to free them.”

              “It’s worth a try,” said Miroku.

              “Are you guys nuts?” exclaimed Inuyasha.

              “I’m with Mutt Face on this one,” concurred Koga.  “There’s too many of them to get to Kanna unscathed.”

              “I didn’t come here to save anyone. I’m here for Naraku,” stated Kagura.

              Kagome continued to plead for the lives of the nearing attackers.  During all the arguing, Kagome did not realize that Sesshomaru had already gone ahead against the zombie army.  After Shippo pointed out to the crowd that Sesshomaru had already engaged the army, Kagome turned and watched in horror as Sesshomaru hacked his way through.  Kagura quickly followed releasing her wind blades on the attackers slicing and dicing them.

              Kagome cried.

              Sesshomaru – along with Jaken – and Kagura were being quickly surrounded.  Meanwhile, the large hoard was almost upon the rest of the group.  Inuyasha cringed.  They had to attack now.

              “We’re out of time!” Inuyasha prepared to engage.

              Miroku drew his staff.  “Spare their lives if you can!” Miroku announced.

              The rest of them nodded in agreement and attacked.  Koga quickly smashed through the attackers knocking them to the ground.  Ginta, Hakkaku, and the rest of the wolf pack struggled but neutralized a few.  Ayame leaped over attackers and moved to trip them from behind.  Sango and Miroku clashed weapons but never struck to seriously wound.  Kirara tipped enemies over.  Inuyasha knocked out members with the butt and sides of his sword.

              Shippo, Hachie, Toto-sai, and Myoga tried to comfort the weeping Kagome but were not sure how.  Kagome then thought of an idea.  It was so brilliant in her mind that she quickly composed and geared herself up. 

              “I need all your help,” she told her comforters.  They awaited her instructions.  “Hachie, I need you to carry me over the army to Kanna.  Toto-sai, you and Myoga can help me look for her.  Once we find her, we can destroy her mirror and end this!”

              “What can I do, Kagome?” asked Shippo eager to help.

              “If I can’t hit Kanna’s mirror from above, I’ll have to try from the ground.  That’s where I need you all to help me clear the area – without seriously hurting anyone.”

              Shippo was a bit concerned of actually engaging the army, but he agreed with the idea.  Immediately, Hachie transformed into a decent sized blimp for Kagome and Shippo.  Myoga rode along with Toto-sai on his flying bull.  They all floated over the battle scene searching for the wicked child with the mirror.

              In all the action and excitement, no one noticed Kikyo had gone missing.  No one except Inuyasha.

              Kikyo? He searched around the chaos.  “Kagome!” Inuyasha spotted Hachie and Toto-sai floating off in the distance.

*******

              “Do you see anything over there?” shouted Kagome to Toto-sai and Myoga.

              Both shook their heads.

              “Kagome,” Shippo quivered as he looked down at the hundreds and hundreds of zombies below.  “Do you think there are any people down there with arrows?”  Just then an arrow flew past his head.  Shippo yelped.

              “I saw a light down there!” Toto-sai pointed with his staff.

              Kagome peered over from Hachie in search of something.  All she could see were endless swarms of zombie villagers attacking.  Finally, she spotted someone standing still with a mirror in her hand.  It was Kanna.  Kagome drew an arrow against her bow and aimed it at Kanna hoping to hit the mirror.  She did not have enough arrows to take many chances so she had to make them count.  She readied, aimed, and released the arrow upon seeing a small glimmer in Kanna’s hand.  The arrow flew past Kanna and hit the ground.  Kagome did not want to chance wasting another arrow.  She needed most of them for Naraku.  Kagome ordered Hachie to land them near Kanna.

              “Uh, Kagome, how can I?” Hachie was scared but right.  There were too many villagers around Kanna.

              Shippo was sweating bullets but finally built the courage to take action.  He jumped off Hachie.  Kagome called out to him.  Toto-sai and Myoga watched with disbelief as Shippo fell onto the hoard of villagers.  Before reaching the ground, Shippo transformed into a giant ball roughly the size of young adult, and started bouncing villagers away to clear room for Kagome.  Inspired by Shippo heroics, Toto-sai floated down to head level, took a deep breath, and scared villagers away with his fire breath.  Myoga leaped off Toto-sai onto a zombie villager.  Myoga the flea stung the villager on the neck and briefly paralyzed him.  Myoga proceeded to the next villager.

              Hachie too was inspired by Shippo’s bravery.  He landed in the clearing Shippo made and dropped off Kagome to go join the fight.  Kagome, bow in hand and arrows on her back pouch, darted towards Kanna as Shippo and crew cleared the path for her.  When Kanna was in view, Kagome immediately drew another arrow, aimed it carefully, and released it shattering Kanna’s mirror.

              The normally quiet and expressionless Kanna gasped at the loss of her mirror.  Hundreds of orbs with comet tails burst out of the shattered glass into the air.  Those villagers that were still alive either wounded or unharmed, received their souls.  Their demeanor quickly changed.  They stood erect and shook their heads waking up from a terrible nightmare.  Inuyasha, Sesshomaru, Kagura and the others stopped their attack as the zombie assault drew to a halt.  Some villagers that came through sooner quickly gasped in fear at the sight of the demons Sesshomaru, Kagura, Koga, and Inuyasha.  Those villagers immediately scattered.  Those that were slow to go or wake were informed by Miroku and Sango of what just happened, and advised the villagers to clear the area quickly.  Ayame ordered the wolf pack to help usher away the villagers.  Those villagers that were strong and able, carried away the wounded.  Some of the deceased loved ones were carried too while most remained on the field.

              As the hundreds of villagers raced away from the area, Inuyasha and the attacking party caught the sight of Kagome and her group of adventurers that just saved the villagers and their companions.  For a moment Inuyasha stared at Kagome in a way he had never seen her before.  Normally, Inuyasha would be the one doing the saving or taking the initiative.  Here, everyone witnessed a different Kagome.  A stronger and braver girl than that which always sought the aid and protection from others, namely Inuyasha.  Kagome? He was awestruck.

              “Kagome!” shouted Inuyasha.  “Are you okay?”

              “I’m fine, but Kanna is getting away!” she replied.

              Inuyasha and the rest of the party hustled to join her and the others.  Sesshomaru continued at his calm pace unwavering.  Jaken followed his master closely.

              “I wonder what Naraku has in store for us next,” wondered Miroku out loud.

              “I really wish you wouldn’t have said that!” said Sango.

              Kanna did not get far.  She knew she could not reach the castle in time to save herself.  A voice inside her told her to stop and face them.  She did as the voice instructed.  Before her, the traveling party finally approached her ready to strike. 

              Then the ground rumbled.

              Inuyasha and the rest of the party stopped on their tracks just feet from Kanna.  Mounds were forming on the ground.  Something, or some things, were forming and coming from underground.  More and more mounds appeared all over the place.  The strong stench of Naraku filled the air.  This time more dense.

              Naraku’s demons! Figured Inuyasha.

              The mounds finally reached their peak.  Bursting from atop of the mounds were demons of all sorts, colors, and sizes.  Each emerged with either multiple heads, multiple appendages, wings, an odd number of eyes, or a combination of each.  All targeted the intruding party.

              “Now this is more like it!” Koga said excitedly.  “No holding back now!  Let’s get these suckers!”

              No one argued otherwise.  The group readied their weapons and attacked the charging demons hoard ferociously.

*******

              Demons were hacked, sliced, stabbed, jabbed, crushed, or maimed among other things.  The battle seemed to be going well so far for the adventurers Sango thought as she tore into a demon with her sword.  When she dispatched the demon, a cleaver tied to a chain wrapped itself around her sword.  As she turned to draw her sword from her attacker, she stared eye to eye with Kohaku, her zombie brother.  Sango froze.  She knew this moment had to come.  She had been preparing for it for a long time, but no preparation could change how she felt.  At this moment, she was torn between continuing the fight to help her friends, or just dropping her weapons and weeping bitterly.  Sango’s eyes filled with tears both of anger and sadness.  Her little brother.  The last surviving member of her family.  Her flesh and blood was standing in front of her with dead eyes.  Kohaku faced her sister but did not recognize or remember her.  Naraku had his memories locked away.  Kohaku retrieved his cleaver on his chain line, then twirled it for his next strike against Sango.

              “Kohaku!  My brother!  It’s your sister Sango! Please don’t do this!” Sango cried.

              Kohaku attacked.  Sango blocked.  He continued his attacked.  Sango would only defend not counter.