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Inuyasha: Chapter 4
Sango's Pain And Kagura's Grievance
December 30, 2023
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A young maiden collected flowers outside of Lady Kaede’s village.  Her basket was half full with various colored flowers for the evening’s event.  The young maiden was fair to look upon. Her face was smooth; not a wrinkle on it.  She had beautiful blue eyes and nice pink lips.  Her hands were soft even after all the work she has done around the village.  The young maiden picked a flower with a bee on it.  The violent shaking of the flower provoked the bee to anger.  The bee stung the maiden on her right hand.  She let out a small cry of pain.  Her eyes watered.  She tried rubbing her hand but a firm hand, not of hers but of a man, grabbed her stung hand.  The maiden looked up to see her helper.  The sun shone behind Miroku giving him a celestial appearance.  The young maiden’s eyes widened at the sight of him.  

“The bee’s poison concentrates near the sting,” Miroku removed the bee’s stinger from her hand then stroked her hand softly.  “I must stroke your hand to avoid inflammation.  Soon, the pain will go away.”

“Thank you for your help, Monk.”

“This is the least I can do for you,” he let go of her hand.  “Please, call me Miroku.”

“The pain is gone,” The maiden made different motions with her hand to insure it was feeling better.  “Thank you so much!  How can I repay your kindness?”

“I ask only two things: first, allow me to assist your flower collecting,” he grasped her unharmed hand.  “And second, will you bear my children?”

The maiden was surprised with Miroku’s last request just as all the other women Miroku has asked reacted.

“You can give me your answer later” he smiled.  “We should continue collecting the flowers.  The festival will start soon and we must continue to make the preparations.”

The maiden nodded.  The monk is very handsome but I can’t bear his children, she thought to herself.  I am but a servant girl and he is of high regard….

Miroku carried the basket of flowers back to the village with the young maiden following closely.

*******

Sango sat under the shade of a tree on a hill overlooking the lush, green valley’s ponds.  For some reason Sango wore a disgusted face.  Kagome joined her and asked what Sango was up to.

“I’m making sure that pervert doesn’t do anything to that young girl,” Sango frowned.

Kagome looked down from the hill spotting Miroku and the young maiden collecting flowers.  Sango seems jealous of Miroku, thought Kagome.  Miroku is always caressing other women and assisting them.  Why doesn’t she tell him how she feels about him?  Or maybe he knows?  Or maybe she doesn’t want him to know.

“I’m glad to see you are well, Sango,” Kagome said at last.

“Yeah, we needed some real rest.  Where’s Inuyasha?” Sango changed the subject.

“He went for a walk.”

“By himself?”

“Shippo went with him.”  Kagome pulled a bag of potato chips out of her backpack and handed it to Sango.  “I’ve brought you a snack.”

“Thanks, Kagome.”

Kagome sat next to Sango.  “Sango, can I ask you something personal?”

“Um, sure, Kagome.”

“Do you sometimes get jealous of Miroku?”

Sango froze as she ate.  “Excuse me?”  Sango pretended not to hear the question.

“Come on, Sango, do you have, you know, feelings for Miroku?”

“Kagome, what makes you think such a thing?”

“Well, I’ve noticed the attitude you get when Miroku is with another woman.”

“I just don’t like it when he fondles other girls and women,” Sango conjured an excuse.

“I understand that, Sango.  I must admit, he can’t control himself.  But why does it seem like you’re hiding something?”

Sango was feeling uncomfortable and Kagome knew it.

“Sango?  Do you plan to tell him how you feel?”

Sango hung her head.  “What would it matter if I told him?  How would I know he’ll change his ways?  What am I doing even thinking about this?!  How could I ever love a pervert?  He’d probably forget about me quickly!”  Sango stopped talking.  Had she just said all that out loud?  She turned to look at Kagome.  Kagome stared back at her with surprised eyes. “Kagome—”

“Don’t worry, Sango. I won’t tell Miroku.”

The two girls sat together under the tree watching Miroku eating the bagged snacks.

*******

“Where are we going again?” asked a curious Shippo.

“We’re just walking around the village,” Inuyasha said becoming agitated by Shippo.

 “Now shut up and let me concentrate!”

Inuyasha walked with his gaze set ahead of him.

Shippo followed thinking to himself.  Concentrate?  What’s Inuyasha concentrating on?  Maybe he’s thinking about Kagome?  Or maybe he’s thinking about how to defeat Naraku?  “Concentrate on what, Inuyasha?” he exclaimed at last interrupting Inuyasha’s concentration.

Inuyasha swung his hand over Shippo’s head so quick he proved the old saying “The hand is quicker than the eye.”  Inuyasha took a few steps before Shippo realized he had been hit.  Shippo shed tears as he rubbed the lump on his head.  “What was that for?”

“For bothering me!  Listen, you wanted to tag along so just tag along!  Don’t ask what doesn’t matter!  We’re going back to village already.”

Shippo sat on the road.  Inuyasha noticed the footsteps behind him had stopped following.  He turned around and saw Shippo sitting on the ground.  He let out a sighed then walked over to Shippo.  “What are you crying about now?”

Shippo did not answer.  Why can’t Inuyasha treat me nicely?  After all, I did help save his life.

“Hey, Shippo, I’m talking to you!”

“Why can’t you treat me nice?”

“What?”

“Why can’t you treat me more than just a kid?  I helped save your life!”

“You didn’t save my life Raygan did.”

“You never even thanked me for helping you!” Shippo gasped with tears streaking down his face.  “You wouldn’t be here had it not been for me!”

Inuyasha looked into Shippo’s watery eyes a bit touched by his speech.  “Look, I’m sorry, Shippo.  There.  Can we get a move on?”

Shippo crossed his arms and turned his back to Inuyasha.  “Not until you acknowledge my part in rescuing you!”

“Whatever you say!”

Inuyasha lifted his fist in the air.  Shippo peeked behind him to see Inuyasha ready to strike at him and screamed.  “Okay, okay!  You win!  Let’s get back to the village!”

“Humph, it’s about time! Come on.”

The two of them continued back to the village.

I don’t want to tell Shippo the real reason I came out here.  If I did he’d tell Kagome.  Kagome must not know I went looking for Kikyo.  I know she was nearby. Sigh, but now her scent is gone.

*******

The young maiden and Miroku walked in interlocked arms.  Miroku carried the flower basket as the two of them talked and laughed on their way to the village.  They almost looked like a couple about to wed.  Just then they stopped.  Kagome and Sango stared back at the two love birds.

“Sa-Sango, Kagome, hey, what a surprise!” Miroku said nervously.

The young maiden was unhappy about Miroku knowing Kagome and Sango offering a hint of jealously.  “So, Miroku, have you been with these two women also?”

The young maiden’s words echoed in Kagome’s head.  Women? I’m not that old!

“Sango and Kagome are my friends!” Miroku tried to make the young maiden understand who they were.  “You mustn’t take this meeting the wrong way.”

Sango took advantage of the opportunity to turn the young girl against Miroku.  “So, Miroku, you haven’t given her the ‘bear my children’ speech yet as you asked me?”

Miroku made a shocked face.  The young maiden was even more shocked than he was.  She slapped Miroku leaving her mark on his face, pulled the basket off his hand and ran back to the village.  Miroku rubbed his face.  Sango stood with arms crossed a bit proud.

“Sango, what did you do that for?” he asked rubbing his cheek.

“I didn’t want her to be another victim of your womanizing!”

“I think it’s more that, Sango.  Are you jealous of the fact that I was attracted to a younger woman?”

Younger woman?” gasped Sango.

Miroku’s head swung to the side by the brute force of Sango’s slap.  Miroku’s face now had hand prints on both sides.  Sango turned her back to Miroku and headed back to the village.  Kagome followed.  Miroku was dazed but headed back to the village anyway.  Kagome kept her pace but slowed down when she heard a familiar voice call out to her.  Kagome looked around and saw Shippo running towards her.

“Kagome!” shouted Shippo as he hopped into her arms.

“Hey, Shippo!  Did you two have a nice walk?”

“Inuyasha kept hitting me!”

Inuyasha arrived right on time to hear Shippo debrief Kagome on their walk around the village.  As Kagome listened to Shippo’s complaints she gave Inuyasha a cold stare.  Once their eyes met Inuyasha stopped in the middle of the road knowing he was in trouble.

“You ought to treat Shippo a little nicer, Inuyasha,” Kagome said then continued walking to catch up with Sango.  Shippo and Inuyasha looked at one another stunned that Kagome did not do something about the way Inuyasha treated him.

“How could you let Inuyasha get away with it, Kagome?” Shippo continued whining to Kagome.

“I can’t be looking after you all the time, Shippo.  There will come a time when I won’t be there to put Inuyasha in his place.”

“But it’s not fair!  I’m a kid!”

“Don’t you want to grow up to be a strong demon?”

“Well, yeah, but I’m not that strong yet.”

“What do you want me to do?  I’m not going to say to Inuyasha ‘sit’—”

A loud thud was heard behind them.  The ground underneath Kagome and Shippo trembled.  Kagome turned back to see Inuyasha’s head buried in the ground.

“Ops! Sorry, Inuyasha!”

Shippo smiled.  Serves him right!

 “I can’t believe I let that slip,” Kagome repented.  “He’s only just recovered from his wounds!”

Kagome ran to help Inuyasha on his feet.  Shippo understood why she did not want to hurt Inuyasha.  He hung his head in shame for wishing Inuyasha ill.

“Inuyasha, I’m so sorry!  I didn’t mean to hurt you,” said Kagome trying to lift Inuyasha off the ground.

“Next time be careful with your words!” shouted Inuyasha angrily.

               “I’m sorry.  Can we catch up to the others now?”

Inuyasha dusted himself off and continued on his way to the village.  Kagome walked behind him feeling bad for hurting Inuyasha.

*******

“Lady Kaede, I thank you for your hospitality, but I must be going.”

Raygan was indeed grateful for all the treatment he had received in Lady Kaede’s village, but something inside him kept telling him to leave.  Dragon and Kirara chased one another across the streets of the village in a game of tag. 

Lady Kaede was greatly enjoying the company of Raygan and his dragon.  “I wish not to bid thee farewell.  I pray ye stay for another day at least until tonight’s festival is concluded.”

“What kind of festival are you preparing for?”

“We are to celebrate the Day of the Dragon.”

“The Day of the Dragon?”

“The Day of the Dragon is an ancient tradition in this region.  My village works hard to prepare for this day for soon after the dragon spirit will give us a new year.  We pay respects to the Great Dragon for its mercy and bid for a better year.”

“Lady Kaede, you have bribed me into staying another night.”  Raygan bowed lightly.  Lady Kaede returned his gesture.

Footsteps and chattering came from down the road.  Raygan lifted his head and saw Sango and the others closely behind her.  The morning sun shone gently on Sango.  She had an angelic appearance, but that appearance was ruined by the disgusted face she wore.  Raygan went over to welcome them.

“Morning, Sango,” he said.

“Morning,” she replied in a sad but angry voice.

Curiosity ran through Raygan’s mind as to why Sango would be so angry.  Miroku then greeted Raygan.  Raygan noticed the fading slap marks on Miroku’s face then knew why Sango was bitter. 

“Is there something wrong, Raygan?” Miroku looked at Raygan with a confused face.

“Nothing is wrong,” Raygan looked at the slap marks.  “I wanted to let you know I will be staying another night.”

“Well, that is great to hear!”

Kagome overheard the conversation and was pleased Raygan had decided to stay.  Inuyasha could not really care if Raygan had decided to leave or stay.  It didn’t mean anything to him. 

Miroku smiled only at the thought of many beautiful women dancing later in the evening.  “Indeed, this will be a night to remember,” Miroku daydreamed.

“Nothing special’s going to happen tonight,” Inuyasha spoiled the moment.

“Inuyasha,” said Kagome trying to make him take his words back.  “I’m sure tonight will be a blast!” she added.

Shippo, Miroku, Inuyasha and Raygan gave Kagome a blank stare.

“You want tonight to be a ‘blast?’” asked Inuyasha with some concern.

“Oh, ‘blast’ means ‘a great time.’” Kagome explained the modern definition of the word.

The others acknowledged then parted to prepare for the evening event.

*******

The quiet, night sky was interrupted by the loud crackling and bright light of the fireworks.  The bright flashes of the fireworks lit the amazed faces of the villagers.  Kagome rested her head on Inuyasha’s shoulder as they both watched the rainbow explosions in the air.  Old folk music cheered the adults.  Some got up to dance.  Others kept watching the fireworks.  Some ate.  Others talked and played.

Inuyasha forgot about his troubles.  He forgot about the Shikon Jewel.  Right now all that mattered to him was Kagome.  Her fragile body leaned against him not for protection but for comfort.  Inuyasha gave Kagome reason to stay in the Feudal Era: himself.  Kagome filled Inuyasha’s emptiness in his heart.  He did not want her to go.  He did not want any harm to come to her.  He knew that they would soon be heading off in search of more shards.  Inuyasha was ready.  His wounds had healed.  His strength had returned.  But now was not the time to be thinking about the jewel shards.  Now is the time to enjoy the night with Kagome.  Nothing could ruin the night for the two of them.

Then Miroku laughed. 

Well, nothing could ruin it but Miroku.  Inuyasha and Kagome sighed at the sight of Miroku surrounded by four beautiful women.  The women tugged at Miroku’s clothes each begging him to dance with her.

“Ladies, ladies, there’s plenty of time for me to dance with each of you!  Now, I’ll dance with you first.”  Miroku chose the most beautiful of the group.  Her green garments matched her eyes.  Miroku guided her with one hand and took her near the instrument players.

Shippo ate a delicious treat Lady Kaede had prepared.  Dragon sat on the steps of Lady Kaede’s house watching the people celebrate.  The Parade of the Dragon was starting.  Villagers got up and danced around the giant caricatures.  Children laughed and played.  Raygan sat by Lady Kaede’s porch enjoying the celebration, but he felt a bit uneasy for some untold reason.  Lady Kaede stepped out of her home to watch the dragon parade.  She looked down on Raygan.

“Does our representation of the Great Dragon suit thee, Master Raygan?”

“This is a fascinating celebration.  I was not aware dragons were held in such high respect in this land.”

“How many dragons own ye?”

“I have lost my count.  I do not keep track of them.  It has been so many years of purifying evil dragons.”

“I understand.  How is it that ye came to be a Dragon Master?”

“My family on the Continent has its roots on the first dragon hunter to turn an angry dragon into its subordinate.  Lord Chen was his name.  He ventured into the cave near my village.  The cave was rumored to house the fiercest dragon ever known.  Once Lord Chen learned of the dragon’s lair, he wanted it for his own.  He used purification techniques he had learned during his years as a priest and created a potion in which to submerse his arrow heads to purify a dragon’s heart.  My ancestors afterward carried the tradition.  The eldest son of every generation becomes a dragon master.  I was fortunate enough to be the eldest son of my father.”

“That is very amusing.”

Loud fireworks interrupted their conversation. Shippo jumped and clapped at the bright displays of fire.  Lady Kaede’s door opened from the inside.  Lady Kaede and Raygan turned around.  Sango exited the house wearing a beautiful blue kimono.  Her hair was arranged in nice locks hanging off to her front and back sides.  Kirara ran out too.  Raygan stood on his feet to welcome her to the evening celebration.  Sango bowed gently.

“Sango, are ye feeling better?” asked Lady Kaede.

“I’m feeling much better.”  Sango searched the crowd and spotted Miroku dancing with other women. She did not let it get to her. Instead, she approached Raygan.  “Raygan, can I have the pleasure of a dance with you?”

Raygan nodded gently and interlocked arms with Sango.  They made their way through the crowd.  Kagome noticed Sango with Raygan and brought Inuyasha’s attention to them.

“Well, well, looks like Sango’s trying to get back at Miroku, huh Kagome?”

“Wrong, Inuyasha.  Sango feels lonely.  She wants to be with Miroku but Miroku’s, well, he’s Miroku.”

Inuyasha was confused but shook the thought off.  He did not want to hurt himself trying to understand how women think.

Kagome looked at Inuyasha.

“Why are you looking at me like that for?”

“Inuyasha, do you ever feel lonely when I’m not around?”

“Me? Lonely?  Come on, Kagome!  That’s stupid!”  He lied to hide his true feelings.  Kagome kept her eyes fixed on him.  “What? Okay, do you ever feel lonely when you’re back in your time?”

“Yes,” she said softly.

Inuyasha was stunned.  She misses me?  “You do?”

“Of course, Inuyasha.  I’ve been with you for so long; it’s weird just being away from you.”

“Well, now that you mention it . . .” Inuyasha could not finish his sentence.

“Now that I mention what?”  She looked into his eyes.

“Nothing.”

“Tell me.”

“I guess I do get kind of lonely when you’re not around,” Inuyasha confessed.  Kagome smiled.  “But not that I miss talking to you or looking at you!  I miss you because you can cook!  I miss the progress we make in, in looking for the jewel shards.  I don’t miss the nice way you smell.”

“Oh, Inuyasha,” she responded to his denial.  She looked deep into his eyes then slowly drew closer to him.  Inuyasha started to move too.  Kagome closed her eyes and readied her lips.  Inuyasha closed his eyes too, but before they could kiss something stung Inuyasha.  Inuyasha slapped his hand on the back of his neck.  Something floated down like a feather onto Inuyasha’s hand.

“Myoga!”

“Hello, Lord Inuyasha.  It’s good tasting you—I mean it is good seeing you again.  Heh, heh.”

Sango and Raygan danced in formal style. 

“Sango, have you been well? I have noticed you have been upset or sadden lately.” Sango did not want to respond.  “What’s wrong?”

“Raygan, I really don’t wish to talk about Miroku right now.” Sango froze.  Did I say that out loud? Gasp! I did! What’s Raygan thinking now?

“I understand now,” he said.  Raygan looked over his shoulder at Miroku.  Miroku was with yet another woman laughing and dancing the night away.  Raygan turned back to Sango.  “Sango, I believe I understand your pain.”

“Raygan, I didn’t mean for his name to slip.”

“It’s quite all right so long as you are comfortable dancing with me.”

Sango smiled softly and nodded.  They continued dancing.

*******

Kagura peeked through the opening of Naraku’s door.  There sat the evil demon Naraku meditating.  Kagura paced the hall thinking of what to do about Raygan.  She passed by another hall when a voice called out to her. 

“You little rodent!”  Kagura was startled by the monotonous voice of little Kanna.  “How many times must I tell you not to sneak up on me?”

 “What are you thinking of doing, Kagura,” asked Kanna holding her soul-sucking mirror.

Kagura knew Kanna expected something.  She thought of a fib to tell Kanna in case Kanna alerted Naraku of her intentions.

“I’m thinking about Raygan.  He defeated me in battle.  Now I want a rematch.”

“Naraku wants Raygan alive, does he not?”

“I know that, Kanna!”  Kagura frowned.  “I must still face him to make sure this Raygan is as powerful as I reported he was.”

“You intend to face him again, do you?  What if he destroys you?”

“Humph, he won’t.”

“I hope you emerge victorious, older sister.”

“Thanks for having much faith in me,” responded Kagura sarcastically.

Kanna continued on her way down the hall to another room in the castle.  Kagura walked in the other direction towards the front of the castle.  Creepy little girl.  Kagura next thought of how she could convince Raygan to aid her in defeating Naraku.  I know he is powerful but can a mortal really defeat Naraku?  I know Inuyasha and his friends wouldn’t believe me if I asked them to help.  Inuyasha would try to destroy me on the spot! Argh!  I despise being Naraku’s incarnation!  I’m proud of the powers I have, but not proud of being a slave to Naraku’s will!  A small glimmer of light seeped out of a room Kagura passed by.  She stopped and peeked through the door opening.  There, at the center of the room stood two jars atop a table decorated with demonic seals.  The jars glowed red. Inside the jars were Kagura’s and Kanna’s hearts.  My heart!  If only I could have you!  I’d enter this room and take back what is rightfully mine, but Naraku sealed the room with a barrier to block Kanna and me from entering!  Only a mortal could enter this demon barrier.

Kagura turned away and gasped at the figure standing next to her.  Naraku stood stern with a serious gaze in his eyes.

“Looking for something, Kagura?”

“Naraku, I was just . . . uh”

“You want your heart and you’re willing to do anything to get it.”

Kagura did not respond with an affirmation but with another fib.

“Naraku, if I’m able to get Raygan to serve you, will you give me my heart?”

“Kagura, are you trying to bargain with me?  If you are, I’m not interested,” he declared coldly.

“Then let me face him once more!  I want to fight Raygan again!  He defeated your demons soundly and nearly struck me down!  I want to teach him a lesson!”

“What makes you think you are a match for him?”  Naraku chuckled at her request.

“You really want to know what he’s capable of, don’t you?  Let me face him again.”

“Try not to get yourself killed, Kagura.”

“I won’t fail you, my Master.”

Naraku stared at Kagura suspiciously.  Kagura’s blood ran cold. Had Naraku bought her story or seen right through the lie?  She calmed down as Naraku motioned to return to his room.  A streak of sweat fell from Kagura’s brow.  Naraku believed her.  Kagura looked around her to make sure Kanna was not near.  She looked back into the room where the jar housing her heart was.  She hoped liberation was near.  She walked out of castle making sure she was not followed by Naraku’s insects.  She plucked a feather out of her hair.  The feather morphed into the size of a canoe and carried her in the air in the almost moonless night.  Kagura left in search of Raygan.

*******

“Naraku’s curse was passed down from generation to generation in my family. This wind tunnel ended my father’s life as it will mine unless I find Naraku and defeat him.”  Miroku explained the history of his curse to a group of young women sitting on the ground around his chair.  They listened with saddened hearts.  “I could meet my fate tonight or tomorrow or sometime soon.  Before I die I want to give my son an opportunity to destroy the evil demon Naraku.”

“So you have a son?” A girl in the group asked Miroku sorrowfully.

Miroku bowed his head lightly, closed his eyes and responded to the girl, “I have not found a woman to carry my child as of yet.”

Some of the women in the group gasped excitedly.  A girl volunteered to carry Miroku’s child.  Another woman got on her feet and told Miroku she was willing to bear his children.  Another woman volunteered then another and another.

Miroku was flattered.  I must be in heaven!  These women want to bear my children!  This will be a night to remember!  Miroku got on his feet.  “Ladies, I could only spend time with one of you at a time.”

“We’ve got the whole night!” shouted a woman.

“In that case, we should not waste any of it!” Miroku tried to hide his smile.

He chose the most beautiful woman of the group first and guided her to a hut.  Raygan stopped Miroku from proceeding.

“Miroku, may I have a word with you?”

“Um, certainly.”

Miroku excused himself from the maiden.

“Miroku, what are you doing?” Raygan was bothered by Miroku’s behavior.

“I’m only spreading the night with the joy of the event.”

“You are womanizing!”

“I would not put it so harshly.”

“Miroku, none of these women like you.  They do not want to spend their lives with you but someone in this festival does.  Miroku, Sango is crushed.  You have not spoken with her since the morning.  She wants to share this special evening with you.”

“Sango will forever remain my celestial female of choice.”

“Why have you not even seen her tonight?  She is miserable.”

“I guess I should have a talk with Sango.  Where is she?”

“She should be by the refreshment stand.”

“Thank you, Raygan.”

Miroku turned to the maiden and apologized for not being able to spend time with her.  Miroku cut through the crowd calling out Sango’s name.  Sango picked up a small bread roll from a plate when she heard Miroku call out to her.  She turned in search for him.  She spotted Miroku, but Miroku had not spotted her.  He continued searching and calling out to her.  Sango entered the crowd bumping and pushing towards Miroku.  Miroku called out her name and bumped into someone else.

“Monk! It is you!” The young maiden that picked the flowers in the morning stared right into Miroku’s eyes.

Sango was a couple of meters away from Miroku.  She pushed through the people in her way.  Her heart raced with anticipation to hear his voice.  Her soul longed to be with him.  A smile began to form on her face as she neared Miroku.  At last she made it to Miroku, but she could not run into his arms.  The young flower maiden hugged Miroku with her lips locked on Miroku’s.  Sango’s heart sank.  Her eyes swelled up.

“You bastard!” she shouted.

Miroku pushed the flower maiden off him.  The people around them quieted and turned their attention to Sango.

“Sango!  This is not what it looks like!” Miroku explained in vain.

“It’s not?  How is a kiss supposed to look like, Miroku?” she shouted.

“I was looking for you.”

“So you gave up your search and decided to replace me with this girl?  You sicken me!”

“Sango—”

“Shut up, Miroku!  I don’t want to hear from you anymore!”

Sango ran from him.  Miroku tried to follow but the flower maiden held on to him.

“Stay with me, Monk.”

Miroku pulled the maiden’s hands off him and left in search of Sango.

*******

Raygan took a seat outside of the village party. He looked up at the night sky sprinkling with stars.  A star shot across the sky.

“Having a good time, Dragon Master?” a voice said in the dark.

Raygan searched for the voice’s origin.

“Down here, Master.”

Raygan looked down at a dot on the floor.

“A flea?”

“Yes, Master.  I am Myoga, a good and courageous friend of Master Inuyasha.”

“If what you say is true then you are my friend as well.”

“I am most grateful, Dragon Master,” Myoga said with a bow.

“Most of what he said is true,” added Inuyasha.  “Except Myoga ain’t courageous.  He’s a coward,” continued Inuyasha.

Raygan didn’t mind it much.  Instead of calling out Myoga for lying, he changed the subject.  “How is Kagome, Inuyasha,” Raygan inquired.

“She went to go check on Sango,” Inuyasha looked up as another firework crackled in the night sky.  “Stupid Miroku hit on another girl on his way to talk to Sango.”

The three of them stayed quiet for a while with only the villagers’ music, cheering and dancing filling the evening sky.  Another firework brightened the night taking the form of the serpent demon Raygan fought off.  The flash brought to memory a question Inuyasha had for a long time but had since forgotten.

“Raygan, let me ask you something.  What is your sword made out of?  I noticed it has a lot of power much like my Tessaiga.”

“My sword belonged to my grandfather,” Raygan explained.  “It was forged with dragon fire deep inside a cave somewhere near the Mountains That Touch the Sky.  My grandfather made the sword out a strange metal.  The metal is light yet as strong as iron.  Using secret magic, he gave the sword powerful strength.  My father told me that his father did so to make the sword strong enough to penetrate the scales of powerful dragons threatening villagers.  A pack of dragons attacked a village and feasted on the women and children and gored the men.  My grandfather was the only dragon master at the time.  He made the sword light to not tire easily in battle.  Realizing that demons were also a growing threat, he made the sword powerful enough to weld against them in combat.”

“You could say he killed two birds with one stone when he forged that sword,” added Myoga.

Inuyasha touched his sword’s handle briefly explaining to Raygan how Inuyasha fought his brother for the Tessaiga. When Inuyasha finished his story Myoga quickly changed the subject. Hopping onto Inuyasha’s shoulder, Myoga asked “Master Raygan, you must tell me more about you and your kind.”

Raygan began explaining how he ended up being a Dragon Master.

*******

“Lady Kaede, is Sango here?” asked a tired Miroku.

Shippo looked up at Miroku.  “What you do this time, Miroku?”

Miroku gave Shippo a cold stare.

“She is inside, Miroku,” answered Lady Kaede.  “Ye mustn’t enter.  She does not wish to see ye.”

“But I must talk to her!”

“She looked pretty angry to me,” Shippo warned Miroku.  “You best wait a bit for her to cool down.”

Miroku sat on the porch pondering to himself and feeling terrible for ignoring Sango.  Dragon sat next to Miroku trying to cheer him up to no avail.

*******

“Fascinating. So tell me, why do you seek to capture more dragons if you already have an entire legion under your command?” Myoga asked.

“My goal is not to capture as many dragons and I can,” Raygan clarified.  “My goal is to become a Dragon Lord.”

 “A Dragon Lord?  What for?” Inuyasha raised an eyebrow.

“As a Dragon Lord I will not require arrows to purify a dragon’s heart.  The dragons will obey me unconditionally.”

Raygan is like me, Inuyasha thought to himself.  He longs to be a Dragon Lord and I want to be a full-fledged demon.

“Why do you wish control dragons unconditionally?” Myoga was curious.

“I can summon any dragon in the area to come to my aid in times of trouble, but my intentions are to defend my land.  For many years demons have come to create havoc on my village and other villages in the land.  With a host of dragons at my command fewer men will die in battle.”

Inuyasha hung his head mediating on Raygan’s intentions. Myoga commended Raygan on his honorable intentions.  A moment later the music stopped.  The village people were preparing to call it a night with each heading their own way back to their homes. The festival had finally come to an end.

Raygan rose to his feet.  “Friends, I must be taking my leave,” he announced he overstayed his welcome.  “I must fetch my things.”

Without holding him back, Inuyasha and Myoga walked with Raygan to Lady Kaede’s house.

*******

Kagome closed the door behind her as she exited Lady Kaede’s house.  Miroku jerked up like a startled dog.

“Kagome, can I speak with Sango?” he asked innocently.

“Not now, Miroku.  She’s still angry at you.”

“Miroku never learns his lesson,” said Inuyasha.

Miroku turned around to see Raygan, Myoga and Inuyasha returning from the festival.

Raygan knelt down to greet Dragon.  “Dragon, it’s time to go.”  He turned to Kagome.  “I know Sango wants to be alone, but I must enter the house to gather my things.”

Kagome nodded.  Raygan entered Lady Kaede’s house while Inuyasha and Shippo frowned at Miroku trying to make him feel worse.  Kagome just tried not to look at him.  At last, Miroku spoke up.  “What can I say?  I’m a man!  I can’t help the fact that I’m attracted to women!”

Kagome faced Miroku.  “You don’t expect to be a womanizer the rest of your life, do you?”

Miroku stayed quiet not knowing how to respond.

Sango sat in the corner of the room staring blankly at the adjacent wall when she noticed Raygan enter the room but said nothing.  Raygan walked over to his gear and applied his body armor on himself.

“Raygan, why are you putting your armor on?” she replied at last.

“I am leaving, Sango,” Raygan clipped on his dark blue breast plate.  Sango’s heart skipped a beat. “I must return on my way.  My stay on this land is limited.  I must make haste.”

“What are you looking for?”

“I seek a cavern housing a powerful dragon demon.”

“Why do you seek him?”

“He will make a great addition to my legion of dragons.”

Raygan tied on his weapons.  Raygan’s powerful sword lay on a bench.  Sango reach over to it, glanced at it then handed to Raygan.  Raygan grabbed his sword as his eyes met with Sango’s.  A warm feeling came over Sango.  She wanted to turn away but couldn’t.  She opened her mouth to speak all the while conjuring up something other than expressing the way he made her feel.

“What is the name of your sword?” she asked trying to cool down the moment.

“‘Flaron’ because of the glow it makes when it consumes demons.”  He girdled his loins.  “Sango, I pray we met again.”

Sango nodded sadly not wanting him to leave.  Raygan’s presence is what she needs; the presence of a real, honorable man.

Raygan gathered all his belongings, headed to the door, stopped and said to her, “It was a true pleasure having met an honorable demon slayer,” he smiled.  “I shall not forget you.”

Raygan exited the house.  The others paid him with respect as if he were a person of authority.  Raygan thanked Lady Kaede for her hospitality, said his farewells to Shippo, Kagome, Miroku and Kirara then walked together with Inuyasha for a distance.  Once they reached the end of the village Raygan said farewell to Inuyasha and Myoga sitting on Inuyasha’s shoulder.

“Raygan, I never thanked you for saving my life,” said Inuyasha.

“You are very welcome, Inuyasha,” Raygan thanked him a bit of surprised.  “May our paths cross again.”  Raygan whistled to Dragon.  The little dragon ran ahead while his master put on his mask and ran after the transforming Dragon.  Raygan leaped on Dragon, and with his great wings Dragon flapped into the air carrying Raygan.

Once Raygan and Dragon were out of sight Inuyasha headed back to the village.  Myoga all the while stayed quiet.

Kagome waited for Inuyasha by the entrance to the village.

“Inuyasha, tomorrow we leave in search for more shards,” Kagome focused her attention on her tasks so as not to miss Raygan too much.  “I sense the presence of a shard of the Shikon jewel.  It is very faint but not far.”

Inuyasha nodded but he did not feel hurried.  “We leave first thing in the morning.  Get some rest, Kagome.”

They all went to rest to prepare for the morning journey.

*******

Dragon soared in the sky every once in a while shaking his neck as to ward off an inconvenient twitch.  Raygan tried to keep a clear mind but the vision of Sango’s troubled face haunted him.  Sango reminds me so much of her.

Dragon swooped down to the ground and landed softly.

“Dragon, why have you landed?” his master demanded to know.

Dragon turned north.  Raygan turned in the direction dragon pointed.  In the distance he caught the sight of a giant feather being carried by the wind approaching fast.  Kagura, the wind sorceress, had found Raygan.

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Moral Conviction Or Grandstanding? My Take On Joe Kent's Resignation

I want to be clear from on the onset that I was livid at the news - and that was before I read Joe Kent's resignation letter. Though to me his resignation is nothing more than political grandstanding, that is not the purpose of this article. My intention is to provide nuance to the issue at large. Not contribute to the mudslinging between the Dissident Right and MAGA types. 

The latest episode of Right Wing infighting drama involves the sudden resignation of Joe Kent as Director of the National Counterterrorism Center (NCTC).

As of this writing, Joe is scheduled to appear on the Tucker Carlson and Candace Owens podcasts. These shows that have become openly critical of the Trump Administration.

His resignation letter, his confirmed appearances on [controversial] podcasts, and the speculation of a book deal only give Joe's critics the firepower they need to discard him as another raging, anti-Israel actor.

Be that as it may, when emotions are high, as they usually are when dealing with anything online nowadays, reason and rationality go out the window.

To understand why Joe Kent’s appointment to the position of NCTC Director was celebrated by those in the intel and GWOT community, I have to explain the terror assessments that have largely gone unnoticed by both the Biden and current Trump Administrations.

This is Sarah Adams and Dave “Boon” Benton. Some of you might recognize Sarah from her appearances on The Shawn Ryan Show. (Shawn’s company has since platformed her own show The Watch Floor which I highly recommend you follow on Rumble and YouTube.) She was a CIA Targeter best known for tracking down terrorists while stationed in Benghazi, Libya.

Boon is best known for his heroics as one of the six GRS operators that defended the CIA Annex in Benghazi, Libya during the September 11-12, 2012, terror attacks.


Boon and Sarah and I got acquainted in 2022 when they prepared to release their book Benghazi: Know Thy Enemy: A Cold Case Investigation. This was not another “Benghazi” book. It was a detailed case file on numerous attackers responsible for the deaths of four Americans at both the U.S. Special Missions Compound and the CIA Annex Station. The book contained the last known whereabouts of the attackers and known aliases. The hope was for responsible members in the intelligence community to not only be on the lookout for these terror suspects but also working with our allies in the region to bring them to justice.

The Biden Administration largely ignored imminent threat assessments Boon and Sarah were able to uncover. During one occasion when Sarah did not use the proper channels to pass on timely intel to targeted installations, the Pentagon reprimanded her for doing so instead of taking her intel seriously enough to look into.

As a Trump supporter, I had hopes that things would be different under new management.

Things did change but for the worse.

Sebastian Gorka briefly served as Deputy Assistant to the President and a strategist on national security and foreign policy during Trump’s first term in 2017. He was appointed to the role again in the new Administration and Senior Director for Counterterrorism on the White House National Security Council (NSC). Gorka has been accused of largely downplaying certain terror threats.

In Spring 2025, Sarah Adams had been given an appointment to brief members of the NSC on the terrorist plots against the Homeland. That briefing was canceled by Sebastian Gorka who went on to slander her character to people within the White House.

Well, the FBI deals with counterterrorism so there was some hope for a serious change when Kash Patel become director along with the new Deputy Director Dan Bongino. Nope. Instead, Patel's FBI opened an investigation to determine how Boon was getting his intel – instead of analyzing and reviewing the intel!

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That same year, Sarah, along with a group of operators and investigators including Scott Mann published a book called The Gathering Storm. In it they address the critical gaps in our nation’s preparedness for emerging terror threats following the botched Afghanistan withdrawal. This includes awareness of Al-Qaeda’s plot against the Homeland.

Next to no one in positions of power and influence were aware of these reports or were writing them off as fearmongering alarmism.

Politically speaking, the Biden Administration, which was an extension of the Obama Administration, did not like any reports indicating Al-Qaeda was still around and growing in strength. Obama himself declared that Al-Qaeda was destroyed in 2012.

In similar fashion, the Trump Administration does not like reports indicating that ISIS is still around and also growing in strength though no where near as large as Al-Qaeda. If you’ll recall, Trump declared that ISIS was destroyed in 2018.

So what hope was there to help inform first responders and the public of awareness and preparedness to terror threats if both the Obama/Biden and Trump Administrations where not taking it seriously?

Enter Joe Kent, retired Green Beret combat veteran and Gold Star husband.

His confirmation as Director of the National Counterterrorism Center was celebrated by those in the intel space both active and retired. Joe Kent immediately took note of threat assessments Sarah Adams and Scott Mann detailed in The Gathering Storm. He made them actionable.

Joe Kent even testified before Congress about the 18,000 known Islamic Terrorists in our borders. All this while FBI Director Kash Patel and Director of Counterterrorism Sebastian Gorka either downplayed it or dismissed outright.

The role of Director of the National Counterterrorism Center is to integrate, analyze, and share terrorism-related intelligence; maintain the authoritative database of known and suspected terrorists; provide terrorism analysis; and drive whole-of-government action to counter terrorist threats against the United States. Joe Kent served as principal adviser to Director of National Intelligence (DNI) Tulsi Gabbard. (It is worth noting that Tulsi is not supportive of the current operation against Iran.)

Joe Kent’s resignation comes at the worst time.

Since March 1st, there have been four confirmed terror or attempted terror attacks on US soil:

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  • March 12 – Old Dominion University shooting, Norfolk, Virginia
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Sebestian Gorka serves as a principal advisor to the President and NSC leadership on counterterrorism matters, including threats, policy options, and response strategies. He's to coordinate interagency efforts across with the Department of Defense, State Department, DHS, FBI, CIA, ODNI/NCTC, and others to develop and implement counterterrorism policies. He’s someone that has proven untrustworthy and no one is really talking about that.

It is to that point why I am upset at Joe Kent's resignation. He was in position of influence and effectuating change. What good will he do now having resigned and relegated himself to cannon fodder for political pundits and critics? 

Will Joe have a moral conflict when, God forbid, more Americans are harmed in the Homeland because the other principal advisors did not take threat assessments serious?

We need people with the courage to dissent while in the fight, to be the change they want to see.

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Sarah Adams posted her frustration and counter points to Joe's resignation letter claims on this X.com Post.

Instagram users can find my summary of the AQ Homeland Plot 2.0 on my pinned Instagram Highlights.

 

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Watchmen: The Book vs Film

We are all introduced to comics at some point in our lives.  (Who hasn’t read a Peanuts comic strip?)  Sadly, the comic book, or graphic novel (collection of comic books), is looked down as a children’s pastime or ruled out as non-compelling literature altogether.  On March 6, 2009, the highly anticipated film adaptation of the first graphic novel to be praised as a master work of literature made its big screen debut. 

There is no immediate consensus on public reaction to the film.  Depending on which group you fall under, you would either love it for its originality, or hate it for changing pivotal scenes from the source material after constant promises to stick as true to the book as possible.

This article appeals to both the educated and uneducated persons in the world of the WATCHMEN!

THE NOVEL

Before I can begin, you need to know the story of the Watchmen (assuming you haven’t seen the movie by this article date).

This synopsis from the publisher DC Comics:

“It all begins with the paranoid delusions of a half-insane hero called Rorschach.  But is Rorschach really insane or has he in fact uncovered a plot to murder superheroes and, even worse, millions of innocent civilians?  On the run from the law, Rorschach reunites with his former teammates in a desperate attempt to save the world and their lives, but what they uncover will shock them to their very core and change the face of the planet!  Following two generations of masked superheroes from the close of World War II to the icy shadow of the Cold War comes this groundbreaking comic story — the story of The Watchmen.”

Rorschach

None of the heroes from the novel are recognized instantly in our culture.  None of the heroes ever got spinoff comics after the critical acclaim of the short series.   Watchmen is a murder mystery developed with the same hard work and care that goes into making a fiction novel.  Both author Alan Moore – famous for this and other works of fiction such as From Hell and V for Vendetta – and illustrator Dave Gibbons have painfully crafted a complex, multilayered, psychological anti-hero adventure that spanned a year in telling (1986-87).  The end result is the perennial and most influential “graphic novel” ever accomplished.  The humanity exuded by each character is strikingly real and relatable.  It is this main element along with the real-world scenario that inspired realistic retellings of future popular comic book superheroes. 

Author Alan Moore
Author Alan Moore

The story takes place in an alternate United States in 1985.  The world is in the middle of a Cold War, particularly between the two nuclear superpowers: the USA and the Soviet Union.  The setting nearly parallels our world except that masked vigilantes are part of the culture, the USA wins the Vietnam War, Richard Nixon is still President in 1985 and the “Superman does exist, and he is American.” 

The attention to detail in terms of the character development, political climate, public sentiment towards masked heroes, and government employment of heroes is all very real, very relatable, very, um, heartfelt.  It’s the realism of the plot that turns the story from a mere fiction to a piece of American History. 

For those that haven’t noticed, up until the debut of Watchmen, the only heroes mingling with citizens of real-world cities belonged to Marvel Comics.  DC Comics superheroes live in alternate versions of American cities. (e.g. the equivalent of New York City and Chicago in the DC Universe are Metropolis and Gotham City.)  Along comes Watchmen and thrusts heroes not only into our cities but into our cultural history.  It is this connection to the real world, the very real interaction between masked heroes, the average citizen, federal government, etc. that sets Watchmen on a league of its own.  Many have tired duplicating it but have never matched its complexity and success.

It is safe to say that the medium of comic books has never been the same since.  And with many popular comic books getting motion picture adaptations, the movie treatment for Watchmen was unavoidable.  It was just a matter of when a good script, the director with the right approach and visual style to bring the story to life would come along.  Twenty-three years later and after a surge of an ever-increasing number of comic books-turned-films hitting multiplexes, Watchmen finally made it to the big leagues with a nearly 3-hour epic theatrical release.

THE FILM

The Watchmen movie version moved around different studios with scripts written then rewritten over and over again without any true convincing concept to bring to the big screen.  Director Terry Gilliam used to be tied to directing the big screen adaptation in the late 90s.  He stated best the complications of making a 2 ½ hour version of the novel:

“Reducing [the novel] to a two or two-and-a-half-hour film … seemed to me to take away the essence of what Watchmen is about.” 

I, like Terry, agree that a miniseries would’ve been the best avenue with which to approach the story.  Though it felt like an eternity, it was inevitable that the graphic novel would get its major motion picture treatment.  Now is a good-a-time as any to do so since movies containing dark, mature subject matter are drawing more audiences to the theatres (e.g. The Dark Knight).

The difficulty in bringing about this book-to-screen adaptation is in how to keep the essence of the book intact while making the film a fascinating viewing experience.  Compromises had to be made, of course.  Whenever anyone is tackling the adaptation of a popular work, groups of purists, fans, and dissenters will always be nearby ready to level any criticism in attempts to impact the filmmaking process.

The great risk of Watchmen is that it is not really adaptable without first tossing out important elements of the book that make the story “the story,” and still keep it short enough to screen at a theatre near you.  Warner Bros realized this issue which is why they hired Director Zack Snyder to take the helm for the project.  They needed to stay as true to the source material as possible.  Zack Snyder promised to deliver the goods as he did with Frank Miller’s 300.

Director Zack Snyder

Ultimately, an all-important comic-within-the-comic – Tales of the Black Freighter – didn’t make the final cut, but it is getting its own film treatment as a direct-to-video.  However, the comic tale is such an integral part of the major story that Warner Bros is producing a special DVD release that will include deleted scenes and the Tales of the Black Freighter edited into the main film.

This is evidence that the filmmakers knew the importance of keeping integral parts of the novel in place and did their best to execute the film appropriately.  Comic book illustrator Dave Gibbons was brought on early on to supervise the filmmaking process to make sure they stayed true to the source.  

THE CONTROVERSIAL ENDING

A fan could sleep soundly knowing that such a talented team dedicated to preserving the essence of the novel is developing the movie, right?  Well, months before the initial release date, speculation about a major revamp to the climax grew amid attempts to keep it hush-hush.  After constant pressure from the press and fans director Zack Snyder dropped the bombshell confirmation that the most major element and integral part of the script was altered to suit a more general audience.

The squid in the novel is a byproduct of artistic design and genetic engineering developed under the guise of a movie special effect.  The actual purpose of the disgusting, giant squid was to fool the world into thinking it’s an alien from another dimension hell-bent on destroying all humanity.

The movie version of “the squid" is re-imagined as a supposed new energy research project intended to provide cleaner, more efficient means of energy to an ever-growing human population.  

The actual purpose is for the villain to reengineer these large mechanical devices, use them as psychic energy explosives each with the destructive power of an A-bomb, and frame one of the Watchmen for the attack.

The villain’s end game in both mediums is the same: unite the world by scaring them into believing they must ward off a common enemy.  In both cases he succeeds

The Original Ending

When Rorschach investigates the murder of Edward Blake – alias The Comedian – he believes there is a plot to kill off costumed heroes.  He sets off to warn other retired heroes of his findings.  While Rorschach is investigating the murder there is an entire other mystery being covered by the Press: the mysterious disappearance of yet another famous creative artist.  The artist is among a group of his peers that “vanishes” without a trace. He is working with scientists, engineers, and others on a secret project for an unknown “filmmaker” all along.   Rorschach’s wild theory about a mask killer is taken more seriously when another hero – Adrian Veidt – is gunned for, Dr. Manhattan flees the earth for Mars, and Rorschach is framed and imprisoned.  All this is occurring during a time of political tension between the two superpowers threatening to go to nuclear war and lay waste to the earth.

Illustrator Dave Gibbons

Illustrator Dave Gibbons was asked about the cutting of the squid during a Q&A session at the 4th Annual New York Comic Convention back in February.  His initial response was:

“The outcome is exactly the same as the graphic novel, but the MacGuffin, the gimmick, is a little different.  I think you know what I mean; there's no squid.  I'd rather not say too much about it, but I certainly wasn't at all upset or disappointed or offended.  I think that's the most important thing about the movie adaptation is that it has to stand as a good movie.  The reality of it is that you have to make changes and you have to take things away, add things on, amalgamate things to make it work in a different medium."

After a follow-up question regarding the squid, he answered:

“Why is the squid so important?  In a sense, in the comic book, the squid is kind of a huge special effect that Adrian Veidt pulls, a practical joke, a trick, but if you have a movie that essentially is full of special effects, then the squid is just another special effect, if you see what I mean, so that I think that wouldn't have worked as well in the movie.  That's my personal feeling about it.  Sorry for all your cephalopod lovers out there.”

So, Dave isn't really a fan of the squid since he wasn’t disappointed by its omission from the film.  He didn't write it.  He drew it from concept ideas by author Alan Moore.  For Dave to come across with little regard for the original concept comes to show that even he doesn't understand what exactly Moore accomplished with the alien squid. 

Historically, anyone believing aliens exist is thought of as kind of crazy.  Whether there's evidence to support the existence of aliens isn't the issue here.  Imagine the disbelief at seeing a horrific scene such as a monstrous, alien squid appearing in the middle of Manhattan and killing millions an in instant.  The apparent “attack” by an alien being would more likely unite a world of differences against a common enemy. 

The idea of forging alliances amid a foreign invasion isn't farfetched.  It’s happened before.  When the Japanese invaded China, the Chinese Communists and Nationalists united albeit under a temporary truce to ward off the Japanese.  After the horrific events of September 11, 2001, America put aside its ideological differences albeit for a while to seek justice against a common enemy.

The infamous “alien” squid monster.

The Alternate Ending

The framing of Dr. Manhattan in the movie adaptation doesn’t make any sense unless you’re on the left side of the political spectrum.  See, the subliminal message I drew from the altered ending is that Dr. Manhattan is viewed as a walking A-bomb created and used by the United States government for the “greater good.”  When the psychic charges are detonated on major cities across the world, the world suddenly forgets about nuclear war and unites to defend itself against Dr. Manhattan; man’s own god-like power turns against man.  The film concludes with the world adopting clean energy alternatives and world peace. 

That’s it.

Well, why would Dr. Manhattan attack the world in the first place?  He was framed for giving his former loved ones cancer, felt terrible believing he was guilty of it, leaves the Earth for Mars, then returns to kill millions around the world?  Nonsense.  Also, the USA didn’t create Dr. Manhattan; he was an accident.  This only scratches the surface of why the ending doesn’t make sense.  You’d have to read the novel to understand The Comedian’s emotional breakdown, his murder, and the shock value of what ultimately convinced the USA and USSR to make peace.

Dr. Manhattan

WHICH IS THE BETTER ENDING?

The debate continues.  The novel’s ending always sparked debate about whether it was a great or lackluster ending to a great novel.  The movie ending caused a stir prior to the film’s debut quickly causing an outcry from purists and debates among the viewing public.

Yes, the outcome of the film's and novel's ending is the same, but the point missed here is that the means to that end are what intrigued the reader in the first place.  So many mysterious occurrences having seemingly nothing in common throughout the plot actually are tied at the end of the novel through the monstrosity of the squid.

CLOSING COMMENTS

At least the film’s lead up to the poorly constructed ending was very well done but could have been better without slow-motion.

Still, the ending should’ve remained intact instead of trying to appeal to a more general audience.  Fanboys are always a major draw at the box office (e.g. The Dark Knight).  The movie opened well below expectations and doesn’t seem likely to recoup its budget in the domestic market.

The book will always be superior to the film.

Andres Segovia
Published 3/11/2009
Revised 7/1/2024

 

 

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Inuyasha: The Final Chapters
Epilogue

Toto-sai stared at the luscious green field and flower beds that was once a dark ruin.  Nature’s changing seasons eliminated all traces of Naraku’s destruction.  It’s been several of years since that final confrontation with the wicked demon.  Toto-sai reminisced of the life-changing event.  No one walked away the same.  He signaled to his trusty flying bull to carrying them to their destination.  After sometime, Toto-sai arrived at Lady Kaede’s village.  There children laughed and played.  Lady Kaede was much older and moved slower now, but she was happy to awake each morning knowing that her village, and the children at play will never have to worry about Naraku again.

 

              A teenage Kohaku practiced sword play out on the fields with a friend. Both of them were strengthening their skills as demon slayers.  Naraku, the worst demon of all, was gone, but demons remained on the land.  Lady Kaede’s village became a place desperate villagers turned to for help to exorcize demons.  This became good business for the village.  The head slayers were Miroku and Sango.  Miroku though was the main slayer.  Sango had other matters to tend to.

 

              Two toddler twin girls tugged at Lady Kaede’s skirt begging to come out of the porch to watch them run around outside.  Lady Kaede struggled to move at the little girls’ pace.  Sango came out of the house to help Lady Kaede.  She told the little girls to go play.  She told them that grandma Kaede would be there.  Lady Kaede braced herself on Sango’s arm, and placed another hand on Sango’s stomach unable to resist the urge to feel the child growing inside Sango.  The twin girls called out to Lady Kaede and their mother Sango as both of the girls ran in circles.  The women laughed at the little girls’ sport.

 

              A shadow appeared behind Sango and Lady Kaede.  The women turned to the approaching Sesshomaru followed by Jaken, Aun, and Kagura.  Sesshomaru came by to check up on Rin.  Lady Kaede pointed to the field where Rin was practicing sword play with Kohaku.  Sesshomaru cracked a smile.  He extended a small sack of silver for Lady Kaede.  Lady Kaede always refused his offer, but Sesshomaru likewise always insisted.  Sesshomaru took his leave with group and left to continue their travels helping others in need along the way.

 

              Sango and Lady Kaede sat on a wicker bench on the grass taking in the scenes of children playing.  For a moment, Sango thought of her husband Miroku.  She tried not to be so concerned about his safety.  After all, Miroku was exorcizing demons along with the aid of Shippo now a much more mature, and strong fox demon. 

 

There were times a large flying creature would pass over the village.  Members of the village rushed out each time hoping to catch a glimpse of a dragon and perhaps Raygan.  After the confrontation with Naraku, Raygan and Akemi parted ways hoping to one day return.  Sango only hoped to meet her friends again, but she also understood the responsibilities Raygan and Akemi had back on the mainland.  Right now, Sango truly missed more than anyone Kagome and Inuyasha.  Ever since Inuyasha transformed, the rest of the events that followed happened so quickly she never felt she properly said farewell to them.  She just hoped that they are well wherever it was they were.

 

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              Kagome looked at her watch.  Her class was only minutes from being excused.  She was in her last year of studies at Tokyo University.  Kagome would soon transfer to a medical school more focused on her field.  Becoming a doctor was a long road.  Finally, class was dismissed.  Some of the classmates wished her a good day.  She waved them goodbye and walked to the courtyard of the campus.  She proceeded to the adjacent public park to meet someone.  There on one of the picnic tables having lunch was a man intently pouring over papers trying to make sense of them.  Kagome approached him and asked if she can be of assistance.  He nodded and made space for her next to him.  Kagome looked over the papers.  It was an application to enter into law enforcement.  She looked at the black-haired, sharp-eyed man.  She smiled at him and kissed her fiancé.

 

              “You want to be a police officer?” she asked him.

 

              “What else can I do that will give me some action?  Traffic guards are boring.  Firefighters sit and wait.  I want to move!” he replied.

 

              “Oh, Inuyasha,” she laughed looking over the documents. “Ever the restless one.  I’ll help you fill this out.”

 

              The two lovers sat the picnic table in the beautiful, peaceful park in the middle of the one of the largest cities in world.  Here, no one worried so much about demons.  It was more civilized.  There was more to do and more to see, in a way.  Inuyasha took a couple of years to adjusting to life here especially as a human.  But he loved Kagome.  He wanted to be with her at all costs even if that meant leaving behind the only life he knew.  She was his world.  He choose to be human for her and returned with her to this industrialized world.  The well that connected both the old and new worlds collapsed shortly after they returned to Tokyo.  Though it was hard for both of them to be free from that past, they settled into their new life.  Kagome showed Inuyasha everything that needed to be known about the culture, engineering, science, and medicinal advances.  Of course she also showed him all sorts of foods.  Inuyasha learned to be at peace, and it was the food that he much preferred compared to the Feudal Era.  But in the midst of all this, it was Kagome.  She made it worth the choice, and he was glad he choose her.  His friends in the other time did not have to worry about the dangers of the jewel.  He wished them all well and a healthy life.  Especially for Koga.  He did end up marrying Ayame after all and became the new wolf clan leader.  Differences aside, they all made a great team when their support mattered most.

 

 

              Kagome pulled out an apple and took a bite out of it while looking over the application.  Inuyasha asked her if she was hungry.  Kagome told him she skipped lunch to finish up a paper.  Inuyasha took the application off her hands and put it in her backpack.  He got her backpack and books then said, “Let’s go eat.”  Kagome asked where.  “Let’s go to that ramen place!” Inuyasha responded excitedly.  He did not mind that he just finished a bowl of instant noodles.  He was always up for ramen.  Kagome got up and hugged his arm as they walked to the noodle restaurant.  “I’m craving a Coke too,” Inuyasha added.  Kagome laughed.  The paired walked away from the park enjoying each other’s company.

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