We are all introduced to comics at some point in our lives.  (Who hasn’t read a Peanuts comic strip?)  Sadly, the comic book, or graphic novel (collection of comic books), is looked down as a children’s pastime or ruled out as non-compelling literature altogether.  On March 6, 2009, the highly anticipated film adaptation of the first graphic novel to be praised as a master work of literature made its big screen debut. 

There is no immediate consensus on public reaction to the film.  Depending on which group you fall under, you would either love it for its originality, or hate it for changing pivotal scenes from the source material after constant promises to stick as true to the book as possible.

This article appeals to both the educated and uneducated persons in the world of the WATCHMEN!

THE NOVEL

Before I can begin, you need to know the story of the Watchmen (assuming you haven’t seen the movie by this article date).

This synopsis from the publisher DC Comics:

“It all begins with the paranoid delusions of a half-insane hero called Rorschach.  But is Rorschach really insane or has he in fact uncovered a plot to murder superheroes and, even worse, millions of innocent civilians?  On the run from the law, Rorschach reunites with his former teammates in a desperate attempt to save the world and their lives, but what they uncover will shock them to their very core and change the face of the planet!  Following two generations of masked superheroes from the close of World War II to the icy shadow of the Cold War comes this groundbreaking comic story — the story of The Watchmen.”

None of the heroes from the novel are recognized instantly in our culture.  None of the heroes ever got spinoff comics after the critical acclaim of the short series.   Watchmen is a murder mystery developed with the same hard work and care that goes into making a fiction novel.  Both author Alan Moore – famous for this and other works of fiction such as From Hell and V for Vendetta – and illustrator Dave Gibbons have painfully crafted a complex, multilayered, psychological anti-hero adventure that spanned a year in telling (1986-87).  The end result is the perennial and most influential “graphic novel” ever accomplished.  The humanity exuded by each character is strikingly real and relatable.  It is this main element along with the real-world scenario that inspired realistic retellings of future popular comic book superheroes. 

The story takes place in an alternate United States in 1985.  The world is in the middle of a Cold War, particularly between the two nuclear superpowers: the USA and the Soviet Union.  The setting nearly parallels our world except that masked vigilantes are part of the culture, the USA wins the Vietnam War, Richard Nixon is still President in 1985 and the “Superman does exist, and he is American.” 

The attention to detail in terms of the character development, political climate, public sentiment towards masked heroes, and government employment of heroes is all very real, very relatable, very, um, heartfelt.  It’s the realism of the plot that turns the story from a mere fiction to a piece of American History. 

For those that haven’t noticed, up until the debut of Watchmen, the only heroes mingling with citizens of real-world cities belonged to Marvel Comics.  DC Comics superheroes live in alternate versions of American cities. (e.g. the equivalent of New York City and Chicago in the DC Universe are Metropolis and Gotham City.)  Along comes Watchmen and thrusts heroes not only into our cities but into our cultural history.  It is this connection to the real world, the very real interaction between masked heroes, the average citizen, federal government, etc. that sets Watchmen on a league of its own.  Many have tired duplicating it but have never matched its complexity and success.

It is safe to say that the medium of comic books has never been the same since.  And with many popular comic books getting motion picture adaptations, the movie treatment for Watchmen was unavoidable.  It was just a matter of when a good script, the director with the right approach and visual style to bring the story to life would come along.  Twenty-three years later and after a surge of an ever-increasing number of comic books-turned-films hitting multiplexes, Watchmen finally made it to the big leagues with a nearly 3-hour epic theatrical release.

THE FILM

The Watchmen movie version moved around different studios with scripts written then rewritten over and over again without any true convincing concept to bring to the big screen.  Director Terry Gilliam used to be tied to directing the big screen adaptation in the late 90s.  He stated best the complications of making a 2 ½ hour version of the novel:

“Reducing [the novel] to a two or two-and-a-half-hour film … seemed to me to take away the essence of what Watchmen is about.” 

I, like Terry, agree that a miniseries would’ve been the best avenue with which to approach the story.  Though it felt like an eternity, it was inevitable that the graphic novel would get its major motion picture treatment.  Now is a good-a-time as any to do so since movies containing dark, mature subject matter are drawing more audiences to the theatres (e.g. The Dark Knight).

The difficulty in bringing about this book-to-screen adaptation is in how to keep the essence of the book intact while making the film a fascinating viewing experience.  Compromises had to be made, of course.  Whenever anyone is tackling the adaptation of a popular work, groups of purists, fans, and dissenters will always be nearby ready to level any criticism in attempts to impact the filmmaking process.

The great risk of Watchmen is that it is not really adaptable without first tossing out important elements of the book that make the story “the story,” and still keep it short enough to screen at a theatre near you.  Warner Bros realized this issue which is why they hired Director Zack Snyder to take the helm for the project.  They needed to stay as true to the source material as possible.  Zack Snyder promised to deliver the goods as he did with Frank Miller’s 300.

Ultimately, an all-important comic-within-the-comic – Tales of the Black Freighter – didn’t make the final cut, but it is getting its own film treatment as a direct-to-video.  However, the comic tale is such an integral part of the major story that Warner Bros is producing a special DVD release that will include deleted scenes and the Tales of the Black Freighter edited into the main film.

This is evidence that the filmmakers knew the importance of keeping integral parts of the novel in place and did their best to execute the film appropriately.  Comic book illustrator Dave Gibbons was brought on early on to supervise the filmmaking process to make sure they stayed true to the source.  

THE CONTROVERSIAL ENDING

A fan could sleep soundly knowing that such a talented team dedicated to preserving the essence of the novel is developing the movie, right?  Well, months before the initial release date, speculation about a major revamp to the climax grew amid attempts to keep it hush-hush.  After constant pressure from the press and fans director Zack Snyder dropped the bombshell confirmation that the most major element and integral part of the script was altered to suit a more general audience.

The squid in the novel is a byproduct of artistic design and genetic engineering developed under the guise of a movie special effect.  The actual purpose of the disgusting, giant squid was to fool the world into thinking it’s an alien from another dimension hell-bent on destroying all humanity.

The movie version of “the squid" is re-imagined as a supposed new energy research project intended to provide cleaner, more efficient means of energy to an ever-growing human population.  

The actual purpose is for the villain to reengineer these large mechanical devices, use them as psychic energy explosives each with the destructive power of an A-bomb, and frame one of the Watchmen for the attack.

The villain’s end game in both mediums is the same: unite the world by scaring them into believing they must ward off a common enemy.  In both cases he succeeds

The Original Ending

When Rorschach investigates the murder of Edward Blake – alias The Comedian – he believes there is a plot to kill off costumed heroes.  He sets off to warn other retired heroes of his findings.  While Rorschach is investigating the murder there is an entire other mystery being covered by the Press: the mysterious disappearance of yet another famous creative artist.  The artist is among a group of his peers that “vanishes” without a trace. He is working with scientists, engineers, and others on a secret project for an unknown “filmmaker” all along.   Rorschach’s wild theory about a mask killer is taken more seriously when another hero – Adrian Veidt – is gunned for, Dr. Manhattan flees the earth for Mars, and Rorschach is framed and imprisoned.  All this is occurring during a time of political tension between the two superpowers threatening to go to nuclear war and lay waste to the earth.

Illustrator Dave Gibbons was asked about the cutting of the squid during a Q&A session at the 4^th Annual New York Comic Convention back in February.  His initial response was:

“The outcome is exactly the same as the graphic novel, but the MacGuffin, the gimmick, is a little different.  I think you know what I mean; there's no squid.  I'd rather not say too much about it, but I certainly wasn't at all upset or disappointed or offended.  I think that's the most important thing about the movie adaptation is that it has to stand as a good movie.  The reality of it is that you have to make changes and you have to take things away, add things on, amalgamate things to make it work in a different medium."

After a follow-up question regarding the squid, he answered:

“Why is the squid so important?  In a sense, in the comic book, the squid is kind of a huge special effect that Adrian Veidt pulls, a practical joke, a trick, but if you have a movie that essentially is full of special effects, then the squid is just another special effect, if you see what I mean, so that I think that wouldn't have worked as well in the movie.  That's my personal feeling about it.  Sorry for all your cephalopod lovers out there.”

So, Dave isn't really a fan of the squid since he wasn’t disappointed by its omission from the film.  He didn't write it.  He drew it from concept ideas by author Alan Moore.  For Dave to come across with little regard for the original concept comes to show that even he doesn't understand what exactly Moore accomplished with the alien squid. 

Historically, anyone believing aliens exist is thought of as kind of crazy.  Whether there's evidence to support the existence of aliens isn't the issue here.  Imagine the disbelief at seeing a horrific scene such as a monstrous, alien squid appearing in the middle of Manhattan and killing millions an in instant.  The apparent “attack” by an alien being would more likely unite a world of differences against a common enemy. 

The idea of forging alliances amid a foreign invasion isn't farfetched.  It’s happened before.  When the Japanese invaded China, the Chinese Communists and Nationalists united albeit under a temporary truce to ward off the Japanese.  After the horrific events of September 11, 2001, America put aside its ideological differences albeit for a while to seek justice against a common enemy.

The Alternate Ending

The framing of Dr. Manhattan in the movie adaptation doesn’t make any sense unless you’re on the left side of the political spectrum.  See, the subliminal message I drew from the altered ending is that Dr. Manhattan is viewed as a walking A-bomb created and used by the United States government for the “greater good.”  When the psychic charges are detonated on major cities across the world, the world suddenly forgets about nuclear war and unites to defend itself against Dr. Manhattan; man’s own god-like power turns against man.  The film concludes with the world adopting clean energy alternatives and world peace. 

That’s it.

Well, why would Dr. Manhattan attack the world in the first place?  He was framed for giving his former loved ones cancer, felt terrible believing he was guilty of it, leaves the Earth for Mars, then returns to kill millions around the world?  Nonsense.  Also, the USA didn’t create Dr. Manhattan; he was an accident.  This only scratches the surface of why the ending doesn’t make sense.  You’d have to read the novel to understand The Comedian’s emotional breakdown, his murder, and the shock value of what ultimately convinced the USA and USSR to make peace.

WHICH IS THE BETTER ENDING?

The debate continues.  The novel’s ending always sparked debate about whether it was a great or lackluster ending to a great novel.  The movie ending caused a stir prior to the film’s debut quickly causing an outcry from purists and debates among the viewing public.

Yes, the outcome of the film's and novel's ending is the same, but the point missed here is that the means to that end are what intrigued the reader in the first place.  So many mysterious occurrences having seemingly nothing in common throughout the plot actually are tied at the end of the novel through the monstrosity of the squid.

CLOSING COMMENTS

At least the film’s lead up to the poorly constructed ending was very well done but could have been better without slow-motion.

Still, the ending should’ve remained intact instead of trying to appeal to a more general audience.  Fanboys are always a major draw at the box office (e.g. The Dark Knight).  The movie opened well below expectations and doesn’t seem likely to recoup its budget in the domestic market.

The book will always be superior to the film.

–Andres Segovia
Published 3/11/2009
Revised 7/1/2024

Toto-sai stared at the luscious green field and flower beds that was once a dark ruin.  Nature’s changing seasons eliminated all traces of Naraku’s destruction.  It’s been several of years since that final confrontation with the wicked demon.  Toto-sai reminisced of the life-changing event.  No one walked away the same.  He signaled to his trusty flying bull to carrying them to their destination.  After sometime, Toto-sai arrived at Lady Kaede’s village.  There children laughed and played.  Lady Kaede was much older and moved slower now, but she was happy to awake each morning knowing that her village, and the children at play will never have to worry about Naraku again.

              A teenage Kohaku practiced sword play out on the fields with a friend. Both of them were strengthening their skills as demon slayers.  Naraku, the worst demon of all, was gone, but demons remained on the land.  Lady Kaede’s village became a place desperate villagers turned to for help to exorcize demons.  This became good business for the village.  The head slayers were Miroku and Sango.  Miroku though was the main slayer.  Sango had other matters to tend to.

              Two toddler twin girls tugged at Lady Kaede’s skirt begging to come out of the porch to watch them run around outside.  Lady Kaede struggled to move at the little girls’ pace.  Sango came out of the house to help Lady Kaede.  She told the little girls to go play.  She told them that grandma Kaede would be there.  Lady Kaede braced herself on Sango’s arm, and placed another hand on Sango’s stomach unable to resist the urge to feel the child growing inside Sango.  The twin girls called out to Lady Kaede and their mother Sango as both of the girls ran in circles.  The women laughed at the little girls’ sport.

              A shadow appeared behind Sango and Lady Kaede.  The women turned to the approaching Sesshomaru followed by Jaken, Aun, and Kagura.  Sesshomaru came by to check up on Rin.  Lady Kaede pointed to the field where Rin was practicing sword play with Kohaku.  Sesshomaru cracked a smile.  He extended a small sack of silver for Lady Kaede.  Lady Kaede always refused his offer, but Sesshomaru likewise always insisted.  Sesshomaru took his leave with group and left to continue their travels helping others in need along the way.

              Sango and Lady Kaede sat on a wicker bench on the grass taking in the scenes of children playing.  For a moment, Sango thought of her husband Miroku.  She tried not to be so concerned about his safety.  After all, Miroku was exorcizing demons along with the aid of Shippo now a much more mature, and strong fox demon. 

There were times a large flying creature would pass over the village.  Members of the village rushed out each time hoping to catch a glimpse of a dragon and perhaps Raygan.  After the confrontation with Naraku, Raygan and Akemi parted ways hoping to one day return.  Sango only hoped to meet her friends again, but she also understood the responsibilities Raygan and Akemi had back on the mainland.  Right now, Sango truly missed more than anyone Kagome and Inuyasha.  Ever since Inuyasha transformed, the rest of the events that followed happened so quickly she never felt she properly said farewell to them.  She just hoped that they are well wherever it was they were.

*******

              Kagome looked at her watch.  Her class was only minutes from being excused.  She was in her last year of studies at Tokyo University.  Kagome would soon transfer to a medical school more focused on her field.  Becoming a doctor was a long road.  Finally, class was dismissed.  Some of the classmates wished her a good day.  She waved them goodbye and walked to the courtyard of the campus.  She proceeded to the adjacent public park to meet someone.  There on one of the picnic tables having lunch was a man intently pouring over papers trying to make sense of them.  Kagome approached him and asked if she can be of assistance.  He nodded and made space for her next to him.  Kagome looked over the papers.  It was an application to enter into law enforcement.  She looked at the black-haired, sharp-eyed man.  She smiled at him and kissed her fiancé.

              “You want to be a police officer?” she asked him.

              “What else can I do that will give me some action?  Traffic guards are boring.  Firefighters sit and wait.  I want to move!” he replied.

              “Oh, Inuyasha,” she laughed looking over the documents. “Ever the restless one.  I’ll help you fill this out.”

              The two lovers sat the picnic table in the beautiful, peaceful park in the middle of the one of the largest cities in world.  Here, no one worried so much about demons.  It was more civilized.  There was more to do and more to see, in a way.  Inuyasha took a couple of years to adjusting to life here especially as a human.  But he loved Kagome.  He wanted to be with her at all costs even if that meant leaving behind the only life he knew.  She was his world.  He choose to be human for her and returned with her to this industrialized world.  The well that connected both the old and new worlds collapsed shortly after they returned to Tokyo.  Though it was hard for both of them to be free from that past, they settled into their new life.  Kagome showed Inuyasha everything that needed to be known about the culture, engineering, science, and medicinal advances.  Of course she also showed him all sorts of foods.  Inuyasha learned to be at peace, and it was the food that he much preferred compared to the Feudal Era.  But in the midst of all this, it was Kagome.  She made it worth the choice, and he was glad he choose her.  His friends in the other time did not have to worry about the dangers of the jewel.  He wished them all well and a healthy life.  Especially for Koga.  He did end up marrying Ayame after all and became the new wolf clan leader.  Differences aside, they all made a great team when their support mattered most.

              Kagome pulled out an apple and took a bite out of it while looking over the application.  Inuyasha asked her if she was hungry.  Kagome told him she skipped lunch to finish up a paper.  Inuyasha took the application off her hands and put it in her backpack.  He got her backpack and books then said, “Let’s go eat.”  Kagome asked where.  “Let’s go to that ramen place!” Inuyasha responded excitedly.  He did not mind that he just finished a bowl of instant noodles.  He was always up for ramen.  Kagome got up and hugged his arm as they walked to the noodle restaurant.  “I’m craving a Coke too,” Inuyasha added.  Kagome laughed.  The paired walked away from the park enjoying each other’s company.

  Koga and Ayame fought off demons as s well-choreographed team.  Koga, aided by the Jewel shards in his legs, surrounded demons in a whirlwind.  Ayame twirled in the air slicing demons caught in the whirlwind.  The wolf pack tore up the small demons.  Ginta and Hakkaku took down demons like amateur fighters.  They did not notice Kanna sneak up behind them with a newly minted soul-sucking mirror.

              By the time Koga stopped running to warn Ginta and Hakkaku it was too late.  Ginta’s and Hakkaku’s souls were sucked into Kanna’s mirror.  Their eye pupils dilated to mostly white.  They hunched over as puppets. 

              “No, Ginta!  Hakkaku!” cried Ayame.

              “They can’t hear us, Ayame,” stated Koga.  “We know what to do to get them back!  I won’t let Naraku take my best friends from me as he did my clan!”

              Koga and Ayame engaged the demons swarming them.

*******

              Sesshomaru simply swiped his sword dispatching each advancing demon wave.  Kagura waved her fan blowing demons away.  Jaken stayed safely behind Sesshomaru’s cover.

              Inuyasha slashed and hacked away at demons as Miroku fought with his sword and staff.  Kagome repelled a wave or two of demons with her sacred arrows from atop of Kirara only when she needed to. Hachie and Shippo bounced all over the place knocking demons off their balance.  They all fought hard but there were just an overwhelming number of demons.  The waves seemed endless.  Miroku analyzed the situation and concluded to use his wind tunnel.  As he was removing the beads off his cursed hand, the buzz from the poison bees came over him.  He looked up frowning at the presence of the poisonous insects casually floating over all the action.  Miroku could not use his wind tunnel to his advantage.  He had no choice but to fight on.

              Inuyasha wiped out another wave of demons with Tessaiga.  He growled as another wave rushed at him.  Damn these are too many! He complained to himself.  “Naraku!” Inuyasha called out.  “We’re here already! You going to let your minions do the fighting for you, you coward?!” Inuyasha taunted the wicked demon.

              “As you wish, half demon,” Naraku’s voice echoed loudly over all the action.

              A giant creature with spider-like features crash-landed behind Sesshomaru and Kagura.  Jaken screamed his head off calling Sesshomaru’s attention to the wicked demon.  Kagura retreated at the sight of him.  Naraku finally emerged.  His first target was Kagura.  Sesshomaru got between Naraku and Kagura.

              “You finally come out of hiding, Naraku,” said Sesshomaru calm and coolly.

              “Dog demon,” Naraku spoke in distorted multiple voices.  “Do not come between me and my prey!” he eyed a frightened Kagura.

              “My business is with you, Naraku,” Sesshomaru responded lifting his blade Toukijin.

              Naraku smiled wickedly exposing his sharp fangs.  He immediately lunged at Sesshomaru without warning, but Sesshomaru dodged the attack with his super speed.  Sesshomaru struck Naraku on the back with his sword to little effect.  Angered that his sword was not Inuyasha’s Tessaiga, Sesshomaru realized his fight with Naraku would come down to using the claws on his right hand.  Naraku quickly swung around taking advantage of Sesshomaru’s momentary distraction, severed Sesshomaru’s right fingers, and broke his sword Toukijin.  Jaken rushed to his Master’s aid but was frightened away by the monstrous Naraku. 

Kagura unleashed wind strikes against Naraku drawing his attention to her.  Naraku sped at her while Kagura leaped out of the way striking at him again.  Naraku, however, was increasingly gaining speed.  He twirled at Kagura gashing her on her abdomen.  Kagura collapsed on the ground trying to pressure her wound.  Naraku loomed over her for the killing blow when the Tessaiga’s wind scar tore through him.  Naraku flew backwards.  Inuyasha charged followed closely by Miroku. 

Kagome rushed over to Kagura to check on her.  The wound was serious.  Kagome dipped into her arrow pouch to pull out First Aid ointments and bandages.  Kagura resisted assistance at first then accepted.

              Inuyasha faced off against Naraku.  He stared down the wicked demon.  Naraku was so focused intently on Inuyasha that he did not see Koga rushing at Naraku at full speed.  The wolf demon ripped off a couple of Naraku’s appendages sending sharp pains up Naraku’s spine.  The demon shrieked.  Inuyasha struck again.  Miroku threw demon seals at Naraku burning him wherever the seals made contact.  Naraku whipped out tentacle extensions from his body flaying them wildly at his attackers.  Koga dodged a few whips, but lost his balance over a boulder and tripped.  Naraku quickly picked him up by his legs and pulled him in closer to him.  Koga could not break free from Naraku’s grip.  Koga could only watch as Naraku used his pincers to dig out the jewel shards from Koga’s legs.  Koga screamed in pain. 

An arrow struck one of Naraku’s pincers forcing him to release Koga.  Kikyo reemerged.  Miroku rushed over to help Koga get clear of Naraku.  Kikyo released another arrow at the retreating Naraku.  Naraku dodged the arrow only to be struck by Inuyasha’s blade. Kagome joined the assault on Naraku releasing a sacred arrow at him but missing her target.

“Kagome,” Inuyasha yelled.  “Save your arrows for a better shot!  We have to slow him down first!”

              Kagome understood.  She ran over to tend to Koga’s wounds.  Miroku joined the fight against Naraku still unable to use his wind tunnel.

*******

              Jaken lamented his Master’s wounds.  The only thing Jaken could do was keep the charging demons away from Sesshomaru.  Toto-sai arrived to examine Sesshomaru.  By now Sesshomaru regenerated his fingers, but it was his heart he could not heal.  As powerful a demon as he was, Sesshomaru could still not understand why his father would deprive him of his right to the most powerful of the fang-forged swords: Tessaiga.  Inuyasha was wielding it.  It was Sesshomaru’s fight with Inuyasha that cost him his left arm.  At this very moment, Sesshomaru felt worthless, angry, and full of hate.  Toto-sai did not mind Sesshomaru’s emotions.  Instead, he focused on the broken sword.

              “I can re-forge this sword for you, Sesshomaru,” offered Toto-sai referring to his blacksmith abilities.

              “That sword is useless,” Sesshomaru rejected the offer.  “I need the Tessaiga in order to fight Naraku.”

              “Sesshomaru, you realize your father had other intentions and plans for you and brother,” Toto-sai tried to reason with him.  “The paths you and brother both took after receiving the swords have served you both on your journeys.  Do you not see it was destined to be this way?”

              Jaken noticed Sesshomaru did not care to hear Toto-sai’s point, but Jaken understood Toto-sai and felt compelled to support Toto-sai’s argument.  “Master Sesshomaru, if I may interject,” Jaken said humbly and nervously.  “Master Toto-sai makes a good point.  I realize that had you not received Tensaiga, Rin would not be here today.”

              Rin. Sesshomaru reminisced of the little human girl he resurrected.  He did not have compassion for humans back then, but the little girl took to caring for him.  Over time, Sesshomaru grew to care for Rin like a daughter.  Now he cannot imagine a world without her. Rin, I hope you are safe.  “Thank you, Jaken,” Sesshomaru’s reply shocked Jaken.  “Master Toto-sai, I now understand your point.  That does not change the fact that my weapons are too weak to fight Naraku.”

              “I know of a sword equally as powerful as the Tessaiga.  More so even.”

              “There’s no time to go on the hunt for a mythical sword,” Jaken stated the obvious.

              Toto-sai asked Myoga to fetch him one of Sesshomaru’s severed fingers.  “This, Sesshomaru,” Toto-sai held the clawed finger.

              “That is not a sword, Toto-sai,” Sesshomaru rebuffed.

              Toto-sai shook his head.  “The sword has been a part of you this whole time.  You just have not been able to wield it.  I believe now you are ready to use it.”  Toto-sai took a deep breath then breathed fire onto the severed finger.  Jaken shielded his sight from the bright flame.  Toto-sai handed the finger back to Myoga.  “Myoga, give this to Sesshomaru.”

              Myoga bounced over to Sesshomaru.  Sesshomaru reluctantly held out his hand.

              “No, Myoga.  Put it in his left shoulder,” instructed Toto-sai.

              Myoga murmured something under his breath then proceeded as Toto-sai instructed.  Myoga put the severed finger in Sesshomaru’s shoulder.  Not instantly but Sesshomaru felt a burning sensation on his left shoulder.  At first he thought it was the finger that was hot, but the sensation continued into his collar bone and down his spine.  He gripped his shoulder in pain.  Jaken demanded to know what harm Toto-sai was doing to Sesshomaru.  Toto-sai only watched silently.  Sesshomaru struggled, panted, and then exclaimed in pain as his left arm regenerated.  Out of his newly reformed wrist his old sword Bakusaiga emerged.  Sesshomaru panted and sweated heavily.  His eyes widened in disbelief at what just happened.

              “Master Sesshomaru, your arm!” Jaken was shocked too.  “Your sword!”

              “How?” Sesshomaru could not hide his emotions.

              “It is because you finally let go of your jealousy and intentions to steal the Tessaiga,” explained Toto-sai.  “You were so consumed by the sword, you were unable to be grateful for the gifts from your father.  Now that you have realized his gift to you, you have received his ultimate blessing: your arm and powerful sword!”

              Sesshomaru admired his restored arm and blade one more time before turning in direction of those fighting Naraku.  Sesshomaru now had the power to vanquish Naraku.

*******

              Ayame had little choice.  She had to help Koga, but she could not abandon Ginta and Hakkaku like this.  Kanna was hiding somewhere in the swarm of demons.  Without any clear sight of her, Ayame could not free her friends.  She ordered the wolf pack to go to Koga as she fought the onslaught of demons in search of Kanna.  Shippo and Hachie came over to give her a lift.  Ayame hopped on Hachie to get a better view.  From above Ayame could see Inuyasha, Kikyo, and Miroku battling Naraku.  Off to the left of that action, Kagome and the arriving wolf pack defended the wounded Koga.  Sesshomaru, Jaken, and Toto-sai were nearby too being surrounded by another swarm of demons.  Still no sign of Kanna, but Ayame spotted Kagura gliding away from the action.  A loud crack drew Ayame attention to the rear.  There she saw Sango dodging Kohaku’s attack while throwing her Hiraikotsu at demons.  Kirara ripped into demons attacking Sango from the rear.  Ayame was torn between helping Sango and helping Koga.

              “Take me to Koga then come back to help Sango!’ Ayame ordered.

              Hachie and Shippo quickly glided to Koga, dropped Ayame off, and flew back to aid Sango.

              Sango continued her frantic dodging and counter strikes.  She was exhausted but kept trying to get through to Kohaku.

              “Don’t you know that he won’t remember you unless Naraku is destroyed?” Kagura approached Sango.  “There’s nothing you can do for him right now except to remove the jewel shard he carries.”

              “But he’ll die!” shouted Sango angrily.

              “What choice do you have? Your friends are attacking Naraku right now.  Will you stop them from killing Naraku?”

              Kohaku stood still between Sango and Kagura.  Their voices had a familiar sound to Kohaku.  Something inside of him was trying to speak to him, but Naraku’s voice spoke loudly in his head instructing him to kill Sango and Kagura.  Kohaku tightened his grip on his cleaver.  Kagura and Sango waited for him to make a move.  Kohaku first threw his cleaver at Kagura.  She avoided the hit but fell hard on the ground holding her stomach.  Kohaku retracted his weapon, twirled it, and flung it at Sango.  Kagura took this opportunity to blow both Sango and Kohaku off their feet.  Sango fell among a hoard of demons forcing her to fight her way out.  Kohaku lay on the ground face down slow to get up.  Kagura hurried over in pain to Kohaku.  She pinned Kohaku to ground and tried to pry the jewel shard out of Kohaku’s neck.  Her stomached cramped in pain.  Kohaku hardly reacted to Kagura’s sharp nails digging in the back of his neck.  She could feel the shard.  She needed it to heal faster and become stronger to battle Naraku.  She finally pinched it and picked the shard out.  Kohaku’s blood dripped off her hand.  She placed it inside the gash Naraku made.  Immediately she started to feel a burning sensation.  The wound began to heal.  Her eyes turned red. She could feel some of her demon powers return.  Kagura grinned.  She got up off the motionless Kohaku.  Just when she was about to abandon the boy for Naraku, she spotted Kanna. 

              You die first! She said to herself.  Kagura ran up to Kanna slashing her fan sending powerful, piercing wind gusts at Kanna.  Kanna could not counter the powerful strike.  Kagura came down on Kanna and smashed her mirror.  Ginta’s and Hakkaku’s souls returned to them. They shook off their hypnosis and remembered what they were in the middle of.  They fought their way through to rejoin Ayame and Koga. 

Kagura grabbed Kanna by the throat.  “Finally, I get rid of you, you little brat!”  Kagura threw Kanna in the air and chopped her up with her fan.

Sango and Kirara finally got through the demon hoard to find Kagura floating away to battle Naraku, and Kohaku on the ground motionless.  She rushed over to him, held him in her arms with tears running down her cheeks.  Kohaku was dying.  In his last moments, he could recall Sango being a nice lady he met some time ago, but he could not remember that she was his sister.  He closed his eyes and died.  Sango lamented loudly as the demon hoard closed in on her.

*******

              Koga got up fighting back the pain in his calves.  Ayame and Kagome tried to get him to fall back, but Koga’s ego got the better of him.  “I can’t let women do all the fighting for me!”  He drew his sword and charged at a demon.  For a long time Koga was used to running at blazing speeds thanks to the jewel shards.  Now he was having a hard time jogging.  Koga felt crippled.  It only made him angrier.  He chopped and slashed at demons expressing his frustration at the loss of the jewel shards.

              Kagome saw Kagura flying on her feather to join the action against Naraku.  She leaped off near the epic battle.  Kikyo was using up her arrows hitting different appendages on Naraku each time.  Inuyasha swung and cut while Miroku repelled with his staff.  Naraku kept regenerating after every injury.  Kagura was determined to slow Naraku down and blow the insects away. She summoned the wind to clear the demons and insects away.  Without her full demon powers, she was not able to get the poisonous bees away. 

              Naraku turned to Kagura.  She stared him down.  Naraku summoned a deeper strength within him to lunge at Kagura faster than he usually moved.  Kagura did not expect such a quick, sudden move.  Naraku’s incredible speed caught Kagura off guard.  He extended his tentacles and wrapped them around her arms, legs, and neck and began to stretch her.

              “So you thought a jewel shard could give you the strength to face me?” Naraku detected the shard in her previous wound.  “Thank you for bringing it back to me!”

              Kagura’s eyes widened.  He stretched her beyond her reach and used his sharp fangs to dig into her midsection.  Kagura screamed helplessly.  The others only watched in shock as Naraku carried out his vengeance on his traitor.  Naraku finally chewed off her shard and swallowed it.  Kagura blacked out.  Naraku tossed her like a rag away from the field to be food for his demons.  The jewel shard Naraku recovered and swallowed only made him stronger. He laughed wickedly as the others looked on with weariness and exhaustion.  Luckily, Kagura’s efforts to clear the field allowed for Kagome to take a clear shot at Naraku.

              A sacred arrow tore through Naraku’s side.  He wailed liked a banshee reacting to the pain.  Inuyasha used the wind scar again but it just was not making enough damage against Naraku.  Just then a larger, stronger, smashing flash tore through the ground at Naraku.  Naraku was knocked off balance with a third of his body being maimed and burned.  Everyone turned in direction of Sesshomaru standing there with his restored arm and sword.

              “Sesshomaru?” Inuyasha was shocked.  “You got your Bakusaiga back!”

              Sesshomaru moved his head just enough to be considered a nod.  “Let’s end this,” said Sesshomaru.

              Everyone raised their weapons and attacked the retreating Naraku.  There was no place for the wicked demon to run or hide.  If he dodged the wind scar, he would get pelted with arrows, or demon seals, or a sacred arrow, or take a direct hit from Sesshomaru’s Bakusaiga.  For the first time since he betrayed his thieving friends as Onigumo, Naraku felt afraid.

*******

              Kirara kept fighting demons off Sango.  Sango would just not let go of her dead brother.  She lost her will to fight and purpose to live.  Revenge for her family and desire to rescue her brother were her motivation to get here.  Both of those things have been taken away from her.  Sango looked up at the faces of the demons trying to get her and Kohaku.  Kirara could not hold them off much longer, but Sango did not care.  She kept thinking about Kagura and Naraku.  There was still time to get revenge.  She wiped away her tears, got her weapons and cleared the demons surrounding her in one swoop.  Sango placed Kohaku’s body on Kirara and ordered Kirara to fly to safety.  Sango realized she could still honor her brother by giving him a proper burial.  The funeral, however, had to be put on hold.  She had a date with destiny.  Sango cleared the demons and threw her boomerang at Naraku’s back.  The impact of the powerful boomerang paralyzed Naraku giving the others a chance to hit him with everything they had.

              “Sango!” called Kagome.  “I’m glad you’re okay!”

              “Kohaku’s dead,” she replied in anger.  “I’m going to kill Naraku here and now!”

*******

              While just about everyone else was engaging Naraku, Kagura lay on the ground staring at the dark skies.  Demons were almost on her.  Poison bees covered the skies.  She was dying.  She could go any moment.  Her hope was to pass away before the demons gorged on her.  Kagura never envision her end would be this one: wounded, broken, and alone.  She continued staring at the sky coughing blood.  Everything was getting dimmer.  She had only one more wish left before dying.  But she knew wishes do not come true.  Getting her heart from Naraku only made her life more difficult.  Now here she was paying for that decision.  She sobbed quietly as the growling demons came onto her.

              Suddenly, a powerful wind picked up.  It was so strong the poison bees were blown away.  The demons then startled at the sound of a loud roar that shook the earth.  Kagura tried to stay conscious to see what was causing the stir.  A ninja dressed in dark yellow armor appeared throwing ninja stars at the demons nearing Kagura and slashing them away with her sword.

              Meanwhile, the rest of the group tried not to be distracted by the strange happening.  They refused to let Naraku out of their sight.  Each and every attacker took calculated hits at Naraku making him move slower and slower with each direct hit.  Naraku was feeling it inside:  his end was near.  If this indeed was going to final stand, he would make sure to take at least one of Inuyasha’s precious friends with him.  Naraku eyed Kagome.  Inuyasha immediately read Naraku’s intention.  Inuyasha scrambled to attack from a different position that would protect Kagome from a swift move by Naraku.  And that’s what Naraku counted on: Inuyasha’s love for Kagome.  Naraku faked an attempt at Kagome and instead jumped at and ran his pincers through Kikyo pinning her to the ground.

              “Kikyo!” shouted Inuyasha.  He got on Naraku’s back stabbing him repeatedly.  The others tried to take a hit but could not while Inuyasha was on Naraku.

              Naraku’s jerked at every stab of the Tessaiga.  He tried to get Inuyasha off him.  The others got ready for an opportunity to attack Naraku when sudden hail fire came down engulfing insects and demons.  The dark valley quickly lit up looking more hellish with the raining fire.  Once again a loud roar shook the ground and surrounding mountains.  Raygan had arrived with an army of dragons to wipe out the demons and insects.

              Inuyasha immediately knew what to do.  “Sesshomaru, take your strike!”

              Sesshomaru did not hesitate.  He could care less if he hit Inuyasha anyway.  Sesshomaru struck Naraku disabling him.  Inuyasha used the wind scar to further damage Naraku’s open wounds.

              “Now, Kagome!” shouted Inuyasha.  Kagome took careful aim at Naraku’s heart and fired a sacred arrow at her intended target.  Bull’s eye.  The wolf pack charged the severed remains to prevent Naraku from regenerating faster.  Inuyasha and Sesshomaru both struck down the Tessaiga and Bakusaiga using the combined power of their swords to finish off Naraku.  Both were direct hits.  “Now, Miroku!” Inuyasha ordered.

              Miroku removed the beads from his cursed hand.  This is for you, father. “Wind Tunnel!”  Miroku held on as he sucked Naraku and his remains into the void. 

              Naraku anchored himself to the ground holding on for dear life.  Miroku strained to hold the wind tunnel open.  The cursed hole on his hand got bigger.  Sango watched with concern as the wind tunnel grew so much it might even take Miroku too.  Kagome encouraged Miroku to hang on.  Sango took her boomerang and launched it at Naraku’s spider legs severing them all.  Naraku’s screamed in terror as he and his severed limbs were sucked towards the void.  Before Naraku could be fully consumed by the wind tunnel, Kagome threw a sacred arrow at a necklace on Naraku’s chest pulling out the Shikon Jewel.  Naraku wailed one last time as he was sucked into the void.  Miroku closed his hand with difficulty.  His garments were soaked in sweat.  The wind tunnel curse was gone.  A cramping sensation hurt his right arm.  He pulled back the sleeve to see that his arm had turned black.  Naraku’s poison immediately took effect.  Miroku collapsed seizing on the ground.

              Kagome, Shippo, and Hachie ran to him immediately, but Sango got to him first.  She dropped to her knees to check on him.  Miroku gagged.  Black blood oozed from his nose.  Sango could not take it anymore.  She had just finished watching Kohaku die without properly saying “goodbye”.  She did not want Miroku to die, but it seemed inevitable.  She needed him to know how she felt.  Sango just could not find the words.  She only kept repeating “Miroku, please don’t die!”

              Inuyasha darted the other direction to Kikyo.  Inuyasha picked up Kikyo and held her in his arms.  He worst fears were realized.  Kikyo was dying.  He was going to lose her again and this time forever.  At this moment, Inuyasha did not have the strength to say anything.  He looked into her eyes and wept.  Kikyo cried too.

              On the other side of the field, Akemi just vanquished some of the remaining demons with the help of Dragon.  As soon as the last demon she slew was confirmed dead, she hurried over to Kagura with healing ointments.  Raygan arrived too to treat her.  Kagura recognized his dark blue armor through her blurry vision.  Raygan! She forced a smile.  Raygan and Akemi treated her wounds, but they knew it was too late for Kagura.  Raygan turned to look at Kagura.  He did not need to say anything.  Kagura was well aware of her fate.  She smiled at the sight of Raygan.  It was not love she felt.  It was appreciation.  Raygan was the first being to ever look beyond all of Kagura’s wrongs.  And here, at her end, Raygan, after all the ways she wronged him and deceived him, was there for her.  Kagura felt better.  This was the way she wished to go.  She was not alone.  Raygan and Akemi stayed by her side as Kagura shed a tear and breathed her last breath.

*******

“Inu-yasha,” Kikyo finally say weakly.  “Inu-yasha?”

              “I’m . . . here,” he had a lump in his throat.

              “This is good-bye, Inu-yasha,” she said.

              “No, I don’t want it to be!”

              “Inuyasha,” she repeated his name.  “We were . . . not meant to be.  Search your heart.  You know . . . your true desire, your true love.  Let me go,” her tears flowed.  “Just keep the promise you made me years ago.”  Kikyo was happy to spend her last moments with him, but she also knew that the person that held Inuyasha’s heart was standing behind him.  Kikyo’s undead spirit only got in the way.  Even if she had survived the battle, there was nothing to stop her from disappearing from the earth.  For a long time now her outer shell has relied on souls of the newly dead to stay “alive”.  Now, with Naraku finally vanquished, she could let go of this world and leave other souls at peace.  Kikyo tried to make Inuyasha understand, but he was too emotional to admit she was right.  His tears fell on her face.  “Inu-yasha, thank you,” Kikyo kissed Inuyasha then dissolved into dozens of orbs.  The souls of the dead she trapped in her soul were free.  The others that watched stood in awe of the unexpected light show.  Inuyasha stayed on his knees weeping for Kikyo.

              Kagome was torn between tending to Inuyasha and being with Miroku.  She just stood there.  Heartbroken.

*******

              Sango looked into Miroku’s darkening eyes.  “Miroku,” she whispered his name.  “Stay with me, please!  Don’t leave me.  I love you.  I’ve loved you for a long time!  I couldn’t tell you before.  I didn’t know how.  You always seemed rude and ungrateful, but I knew, and I know.  I know you tried to talk to me many times about this,” Sango’s tears dripped off Miroku’s face.  “I love you, Miroku!” she finally broke down and wept bitterly.  All the emotions she bottled up inside, everything she ever felt just came out as heartfelt sorrow.  A hand touched her on the shoulder.  Sango tried not to look, but Raygan insisted.  Sango stared up at him surprised to see him.  Raygan asked for some room.  Akemi embraced Sango to comfort her.  Raygan took out the healing potion he could not get in time to save his sister.  This time it was soon enough for Miroku.  Raygan gave some of the elixir to Miroku.  A few seconds later he gasped and coughed.  Shippo and Hachie cheered.  Sango overwhelmed with joy.  Raygan got up giving space for Sango to be with him.

              “San-go,” Miroku coughed. 

              “I’m here,” she cried joyfully.

              “Will you – will you -” he struggled to finish the sentence. “Will you bear my children?” Sango kissed Miroku.  He took that as a “yes”.

              Kagome was grateful to Raygan and Akemi for their help in a nick of time.  She was still mourning for Inuyasha.  It was not jealously.  It was sadness.  She knew how much Kikyo meant to Inuyasha, and what Naraku did to tear them apart.  Still, she too loved Inuyasha.  She just was not sure if Inuyasha felt the same way.

              Toto-sai carried the rest of the Shikon Jewel to Kagome and handed it to her.  Kagome held the incomplete jewel in her hand.  She took out the rest of the shards from her arrow pouch.  She completed the puzzle fitting each shard into place.  The purple jewel gleamed brightly.  At long last, the Shikon No Tama was whole and in possession of its rightful owner.

*******

              Ginta and Hakkaku flanked Koga as he tried to walk.  Ayame and the wolf pack came too to reunite with the others to celebrate the bittersweet conclusion.  Sango and Miroku, Shippo, Hachie laughed with joy as they reunited with their wolf clan friends.  Raygan and Akemi exchanged introductions with the new friends. Kirara hopped onto Sango’s shoulder.

              “Sango?” a faint voice interrupted the jubilee.  Everyone turned to the voice.  Sango pushed through those that blocked her view of Kohaku. 

              “But, how?” Sango wondered how her dead brother was now alive and remembering her.  With Naraku now dead, Kohaku’s memories surely returned to him, but how could Kohaku come back to life?  Sango raced to embrace her little brother.  He buried his head on her shoulder thankful the nightmare was finally over. Sango peered over her shoulder and noticed someone walking far away in the distance.  Sesshomaru?

*******

              “Are you bringing her back to life too, Master Sesshomaru?” Jaken asked him.

              Sesshomaru stared at Kagura’s mutilated body.  He pondered to himself for a moment.  Jaken figured Sesshomaru would do the right thing and revive her.

              “Come, Jaken,” ordered Sesshomaru.

              Jaken was taken back.  “Um, Master Sesshomaru, I thought you intended to save her.”

              Sesshomaru walked away.

              “Perhaps you might reconsider,” Raygan approached them.  “Lord Sesshomaru, I am glad to see you well.” Raygan noticed Sesshomaru’s restored arm.  “I know you owe me nothing.  I, however, am indebted to you for saving the life of my dragon.  I would be remised if I did not plead for her life.  I, in fact, would not be standing here without her.”

              Sesshomaru looked back at Kagura’s body.  “You perhaps do not understand how it is that my sword is able to revive the dead.  It requires consent of my heart.”

              “I suppose you mean to not have any pity on Kagura?” concluded Raygan.

              “No,” Sesshomaru paused then continued. “That is not it.  I do, but if I revive her . . .”

              Jaken understood now.  Jaken has noticed why on several occasions Sesshomaru behaved colder or stranger than usual with Kagura.  It was not that he hated her.  It was that Sesshomaru has or had feeling for Kagura.  Now it all made sense to Jaken.  If he lets Kagura go, Sesshomaru does not have to be connected to someone else.  Sesshomaru already felt compromised with saving Rin.  He had to reconsider any decision that might put Rin in harm’s way.  He could not bear to lose her.  If Sesshomaru revives Kagura now, it would only give another opportunity for him and Kagura to grow their feelings, and then one day, Sesshomaru would have to say goodbye to Kagura when nature takes its course.  Sesshomaru is not one to express emotion, but Jaken has been around him long enough to know that Sesshomaru was and is a complicated demon.  He does not speak about his feelings, but perhaps it was time to give love a chance to grow.

              “Master Sesshomaru,” Jaken interjected.  “I now understand.  I can only advise you, Lord Sesshomaru, to follow your heart.”

              Sesshomaru fought himself inside for a while and finally came to a decision.

*******

Kagome finally got the courage to walk up to Inuyasha.  “Inuyasha?” He did not immediately respond.  She sat next to him.  “Inuyasha, are you going to be okay?”

“Kagome…” Inuyasha’s voice trailed off.

“I’m sorry about Kikyo,” Kagome too lamented her loss.

“She was long gone, Kagome,” he continued staring at the ground.  “I just – I just waited so long for this moment. Now I don’t know what to do. Or what I want…”

Kagome pulled out the Shikon Jewel.  “Are you referring to this?”

Inuyasha’s eyes gleamed.  The Shikon Jewel.  Here now in its entirety.  The jewel with the power to give its possessor whatever they desire.  Long had Inuyasha wanted the jewel for himself.  All his life he was always put down for being a half breed.  The jewel was his way of fixing that.  Over the years, Inuyasha changed his mind for why he wanted the jewel multiple times.  Now here is the jewel.  He asked her what she intends to do with the completed jewel.

“Honestly, I have no need for it.  You’re the person I know that has wanted this the most over anyone.  I’m willing to give it to you, Inuyasha,” she looked at him with caring eyes.  “But depending on what you decide, it will also affect my choice too.”

“What do you mean, Kagome?  What choice?”

“I have my own world and time to go to, Inuyasha,” Kagome did not try to let her attachment to Inuyasha get the better of her.

“Regardless of what I choose to do with the jewel, why the heck would you even want to stay here in this place?”

“Isn’t it obvious?” she teased.

Inuyasha nodded slightly.  “Me . . . too …” his voice trailed off.

“Inuyasha, I do love you,” Kagome finally confessed what everyone else knew.  “But I cannot tell you what to do with the jewel.  I give it to you to do as you please.”

“If I become a full demon, you can stay here in the Feudal Era and become a priestess, Kagome!” Inuyasha explained.

Kagome smiled then looked away in direction of the rising sun.  The orange glow growing in the sky was erasing away the longest night of their lives. “I don’t know, Inuyasha.  I have a whole other life waiting for me.”  A thought crossed Kagome’s mind about what Inuyasha said, but perhaps that’s what Inuyasha wanted: to be reconnected with Kikyo in some way.  By becoming a priestess, he was in a way getting to be with “Kikyo”.  Kagome is, or was, after all, the supposed reincarnated Kikyo.  Kagome did not like the idea even if the decision meant for her to be with Inuyasha.  Kagome was her own person with her own life and other world.  If Inuyasha was going to make a choice, it would have to be for Kagome or for himself.

Inuyasha stared intently at the Shikon Jewel.  There was a long silence between the two of them.

With the exception of Sesshomaru and Jaken, the rest of the survivors along with Raygan and Akemi gathered near the couple.  Neither of them had to ask what was going on.  They all knew this was the moment the path all of them had been on would bring them to.  Though there are members of the group that wished for the Shikon Jewel to be their own, Inuyasha had the right to it because of Kagome.  The group awaited Inuyasha’s decision of what to use the jewel for.  Once he made his choice, there would be no going back and the jewel would be dissolved forever.  The saga of the jewel shard hunt could never be repeated again.

Inuyasha finally stood up and turned to the group with Kagome at his side.  He had finally reached his decision.  Inuyasha brought the jewel towards his chest, made his wish, and absorbed the jewel into his body.  The power of the Shikon Jewel was being manifested.  It shined brightly forcing everyone to turn away as Inuyasha was transformed.  Inuyasha’s wish had been granted and the Shikon No Tama was no more.